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Enamored

Intense ache of a passionate mind, Rhyming heart can only perceive, Togetherness seems a bliss , Parting of ways abyss , Limits undefined, Rhyme or reason, No hair line, Savour, Traps! Written on 2/6/14 Contest- nonet Sponsor- Freddie V

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2014 3:19:00 PM

I loved the lines that rhymed bliss and abyss. Good luck in the nonet contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/7/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for the visit n the wishes n beautiful comments !

Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2014 11:53:00 AM

Ahhh!....so this is what love entails! It's got its ups and downs...but most important is not to be blind to it; happiness could easily change to pain. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/7/2014 3:16:00 AM

Rightly perceived ,, n happiness everyone cherishes but the pain uncalled for is unbearable Paul // upma// thanks for lovely comments !

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 6/2/2014 9:29:00 AM

Very good. I particularly liked the 3rd and 4th lines.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/3/2014 4:19:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Mark ,,, appreciate comments !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2014 9:21:00 AM

Way to go with this creative work..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/3/2014 4:18:00 AM

Thanks Sara for the visit n the like !