Emily-Inspiration

did in my mind's dawn- as sun light greets the dawn

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Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 5:45:00 AM

This is the depth I was referring to, Brian. Magnificent Senryu. She is such an inspiration to me as well. Elaine

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2009 4:15:00 PM

Interesting Senryu here. I hope that the mind did dawn. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 11/23/2009 4:06:00 PM

Great Senryu Brian. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 8:48:00 AM

Thankxxx Brian for your assistance .. have changed the type of poetry.. my (...) lines are sort of my trademark.. been using them for mostly all my poetry but I will correct... Brian to my rescue once again.. thankxxx... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 5:39:00 AM

Such a lovely lovely senryu .. title flowing into your words.. awesome.. write... this is wonderful Brian.. unique.. thankxxx for sharing today... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"