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Embers of Time - Tercets-Win

As a kid I was fascinated to the gold ring of my grandma, I used to play with it when she would cuddle me in her lap As I grew up, got more introvert sitting alone as if in trauma. The reason was ardent desire to get admission in university Though my father with little means was trying hard with hope And to my surprise my father managed even in the adversity. One day received urgent call from my father to come home As I entered, saw grandma on the bed with her palm clap With tears in eyes between her palms she took my palm. She said:” When wind blows, bent down as do the plants” I joined her, "Surrender, ride it, lift your head high still it stops” I said, “Since you taught the refrains, they’re in my prayers” She breathed her last before I could further say my words Leaving blue sapphire ring- a symbolic message of hope That Saturn is a good teacher but bad master for Libras.
+++++++ * The poem is in Tercet Form. But not available on PS. So I have listed it as Rhyme. April 19, 2014 Form: Tercet First Place win Contest: Embers of Time by Gal Angel

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Date: 5/23/2014 9:51:00 PM
Big congrats on the win my friend!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:58:00 PM
gloriously scribed, dr.ram.. applause and huggs!
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:36:00 PM
Dr RAm, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2014 7:44:00 AM
A heartfelt write Dr Ram...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/19/2014 10:33:00 PM
Wonderful Dr. Ram ! congrats on ur great win !
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Date: 5/19/2014 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Dr Ram
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/7/2014 1:02:00 AM
This is sad but a very meaningful poem that is beautifully written Dr. Ram.
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Date: 4/19/2014 5:57:00 AM
Sadly beautiful and well shared, my friend.
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