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Embers Of Time

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Embers Of Time

The azure sky embraces 
the beauty of our love.
It’s always you, forever you
I am dreaming of.

I feel your presence in
the cool floating mist.
I recall your tender touch
and how gently you kissed.

I see your picture hanging
on my bedroom wall
and I still feel warm embers
of our love through it all.

I think even in our separation
our deep love still grows.
From my heart to your heart
in heaven, my love flows.

Copyright © Connie Marcum Wong

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  1. Date: 7/28/2015 11:08:00 PM
    G'day Connie... a very moving poem filled with emotion and devotion - thank you Connie - Lindsay

  1. Date: 6/2/2014 11:25:00 PM
    This indeed is a beauty of a poem. It is a beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/23/2014 9:47:00 PM
    Congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 5/22/2014 11:29:00 PM
    precious images in the name of love, connie.. beautiful!.. applause to you and huggs

  1. Date: 5/22/2014 3:08:00 AM
    True love can make our longing grows, this really make us float and dream more. It makes me fall in love again.

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 5:00:00 PM
    Connie, you have a soft touch and gentle heart that makes this kind of contest your specialty. Congrats on an obvious winner!

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 10:35:00 PM
    Connie, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 9:05:00 AM
    Lovely memories keep the embers glowing. Congrats on a deserved win! // paul

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 1:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fine fine, Connie

  1. Date: 5/19/2014 5:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena

  1. Date: 5/11/2014 11:39:00 PM
    Love it!! Bravo!! However did you intend the word in line twelve shown as "though" or instead "through" it all -- with the missing -r-? Just asking no offence intended.

    Lindley Avatar Robert Lindley
    Date: 5/17/2014 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy to help.. Such a moving and sweet write I didn't want to see a typo lessen it's effectiveness to the reader..
    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 5/12/2014 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robert, thanks so much for catching my typo. Hate it when that happens. I always appreciate anyone letting me know if I miss it. I fixed it. Glad you liked my poem. Mahalo (Hawaiian for thank you), Connie
  1. Date: 5/9/2014 1:31:00 AM
    Hi Connie. I really like this. Beautifully written and artfully expressed. Kudos, my

  1. Date: 4/21/2014 2:17:00 PM
    Connie, I have read your poem many times, each time letting it wash over me as I do when I read poetry. Your first line leaves me with a vision of Big Sky Country -- the Dakotas, or the Midwest -- and then I am brought to earth grounded in the presence of this powerful love -- with a simple "picture hanging on my bedroom wall". There is a bittersweet feeling to your last stanza -- I am concerned there is heartbreak. But it flows with such sweetness and such Faith, it is hard to feel sad...Sam

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 12:59:00 PM
    You had me right away with the title. Well expressed Connie.

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 10:13:00 PM
    I am at a loss for words, such a lovely poem!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 6:52:00 PM
    connie, I don't dare see your itty bitty entry yet, but am looking forward to judging this weekend. thanks for seeing my poem. yes, I need to put that one up for you!

  1. Date: 4/14/2014 6:22:00 PM
    wow, i don't know how anyone could do this theme any better. It is sure to be a winner.

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 4/14/2014 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a fantastic compliment you gave me Andrea. Thank you so much! Love, Connie
  1. Date: 4/14/2014 4:29:00 PM
    You describe love grandly Connie.. He will be waiting for you with open arms when you time comes...Hugs Tim

  1. Date: 4/14/2014 2:33:00 AM
    - A very moving,sweet and lovely written poem, Connie !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)