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Embers of Time

The azure sky embraces the beauty of our love. It’s always you, forever you I am dreaming of. I feel your presence in the cool floating mist. I recall your tender touch and how gently you kissed. I see your picture hanging on my bedroom wall and I still feel warm embers of our love through it all. I think even in our separation our deep love still grows. From my heart to your heart in heaven, my love flows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/28/2021 10:28:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
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Date: 7/28/2015 11:08:00 PM
G'day Connie... a very moving poem filled with emotion and devotion - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 6/2/2014 11:25:00 PM
This indeed is a beauty of a poem. It is a beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations.... Lucilla
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:47:00 PM
Congrats on the win!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:29:00 PM
precious images in the name of love, connie.. beautiful!.. applause to you and huggs
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Date: 5/22/2014 3:08:00 AM
True love can make our longing grows, this really make us float and dream more. It makes me fall in love again.
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:35:00 PM
Connie, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2014 9:05:00 AM
Lovely memories keep the embers glowing. Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
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Date: 5/20/2014 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Connie
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:39:00 PM
Love it!! Bravo!! However did you intend the word in line twelve shown as "though" or instead "through" it all -- with the missing -r-? Just asking no offence intended.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/17/2014 9:50:00 AM
Happy to help.. Such a moving and sweet write I didn't want to see a typo lessen it's effectiveness to the reader..
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/12/2014 3:29:00 AM
Robert, thanks so much for catching my typo. Hate it when that happens. I always appreciate anyone letting me know if I miss it. I fixed it. Glad you liked my poem. Mahalo (Hawaiian for thank you), Connie
Date: 5/9/2014 1:31:00 AM
Hi Connie. I really like this. Beautifully written and artfully expressed. Kudos, my dear...xxx...mel
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:17:00 PM
Connie, I have read your poem many times, each time letting it wash over me as I do when I read poetry. Your first line leaves me with a vision of Big Sky Country -- the Dakotas, or the Midwest -- and then I am brought to earth grounded in the presence of this powerful love -- with a simple "picture hanging on my bedroom wall". There is a bittersweet feeling to your last stanza -- I am concerned there is heartbreak. But it flows with such sweetness and such Faith, it is hard to feel sad...Sam
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Date: 4/16/2014 12:59:00 PM
You had me right away with the title. Well expressed Connie.
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Date: 4/15/2014 10:13:00 PM
I am at a loss for words, such a lovely poem!!
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Date: 4/15/2014 6:52:00 PM
connie, I don't dare see your itty bitty entry yet, but am looking forward to judging this weekend. thanks for seeing my poem. yes, I need to put that one up for you!
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Date: 4/14/2014 6:22:00 PM
wow, i don't know how anyone could do this theme any better. It is sure to be a winner.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2014 7:15:00 PM
What a fantastic compliment you gave me Andrea. Thank you so much! Love, Connie
Date: 4/14/2014 4:29:00 PM
You describe love grandly Connie.. He will be waiting for you with open arms when you time comes...Hugs Tim
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:33:00 AM
- A very moving,sweet and lovely written poem, Connie !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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