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Eleventy-Ten

Children see things in a simple way They could teach us a lot, my friends Makes sense and it's perfectly logical That eleventy-ten follows ten Sadly they have to eventually grow up And lose their childhood innocence To see the world through children's eyes Before life's problems commence Life's not complicated as in later years Just black and white, no greys No traumas, no hang-ups, no challenges To trouble their brain every day They say it and play it just like it is No delusions of fame or riches They simply live and enjoy the moment And scratch where the itchy spot itches Those days are distant and gone forever But I still remember them well When I see some tots on a teeter totter I just sit and watch for a spell Children see things in a simple way They could teach us a lot, my friend Makes sense and it's perfectly logical That eleventy-ten follows ten © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 7/15/2015 2:14:00 PM
Children do teach us a lot and are always so fun to be around! I really love your touching quatrains..this one is really sweet! Always, Laura
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Date: 6/29/2015 3:25:00 PM
They are keeping me young Jack. My youngest always uses fifty hundred : )
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/30/2015 10:00:00 AM
I'm remember being entertained for hours by my wee ones!!!
Date: 6/29/2015 1:54:00 PM
so true so true. I really liked reading this one.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/30/2015 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Love ya... hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 6/29/2015 12:09:00 PM
What?!!!! We have to grow up!!!! Think I'll just enter my second childhood... Sounds good to me. I'll just let Hubby and Grandpa Troll solve problems... Besides playing with Dragon is way more fun than paying bills... Ummm... Maybe I should pay those first... and clean the house... refill the fire extinguishers... Do the shopping... ummm.... Don't rush me Dragon... I'm getting there... Or I will... eventually... Honest! Right after my nap. Sigh! Well maybe...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/30/2015 10:03:00 AM
Second childhood.. I'm constantly being a accused of that! It's really the only way to get through this cuckoo life eh!!! xxx
Date: 6/29/2015 8:58:00 AM
HEY WHERE ARE YOU ? IT'S MONDAY...yes I like this poem but then I like all of them...You doing okay? Lemme know.....
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Date: 6/29/2015 9:42:00 AM
HEY HERE I IS!!! I'm doin' EXTRA fine on the fine Monday morning and now even better since I checked my inbox and saw this Judy person's name! How's my Judy girl... bright and cheery??? Loving hugs, Jacko xxx

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