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Pele, Goddess of Fire First fire surges from the inner Earth. Island waters greet the fire goddess Risen from Earth's fiery core, her birth, Endows with lava, land from her first kiss. Exploding from a volcanic shower Earth spews fire as Pele emerges... Her hair glows golden in the twilight hour, Streaming slowly as her passion surges. Gracefully she moves and quietly creeps On her burning path toward silver sea. Wanting all things that she covers, she keeps. Pele's steamy kisses saved for the sea. Sorrow's shadowed Pele for timeless years. Sadness is seen in her ebony tears. April 30, 2016 ELEMENTS Part 4: Fire - Poetry Contest Sponsor Brian Davey *Pele's hair is a form of lava. It is named after Pele, the Hawaiian goddess of volcanoes. It can be defined as volcanic glass fibers or thin strands of volcanic glass (Shimozuru, 1994). The strands are formed through the stretching of molten basaltic glass from lava, usually from lava fountains, lava cascades, and vigorous lava flows. *Pele's tears Pele’s tears is a geological term for small pieces of solidified lava drops formed when airborne particles of molten material fuse into tearlike drops of volcanic glass. Pele’s tears are jet black in color and are often found on one end of a strand of Pele's hair. Pele's tears is primarily a scientific term used by volcanologists. IF YOU CAN SPARE JUST A COUPLE MINUTES COPY AND PASTE. THIS LINK INTO YOUR BROWSER. I IS JUST AWESOME: https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=fire+goddess+pele%27s+beginning&&view=detail&mid=046A3A192A412F3A5E2D046A3A192A412F3A5E2D&FORM=VRDGAR http://www.coffeetimes.com/pele.htm (Story of Goddess Pele)

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Date: 8/27/2020 12:13:00 PM
Hi Connie, what an education I've received today! First, your sonnet is outstanding, and going in my faves. Second, I was thrilled that the video link was still active and enjoyed it thoroughly. Third, I greatly appreciate when poets include education tidbits that help the reader understand the context of the poem and learn new things. By far my favorite read today. Many blessings ~ John
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Date: 5/28/2016 5:43:00 PM
Excellent win! You taught us myth, history, geology, and made it all beautiful!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/28/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Edlynn. Everyone who lives in Hawaii is aware of Pele's power. ; )
Date: 5/18/2016 1:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. Thanks for sharing Connie. The lava stories were informative. Best wishes, RP.
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:49:00 PM
The Goddess Pele is very much alive and revered. Visitors that take lava rocks back with them as souveneers have such bad luck they end up mailing them back to Hawaii all the time. Thank you R.P. ; )
Date: 5/9/2016 9:06:00 PM
G'day Connie ... a very informative and well written sonnet Connie, thank you. We don't have volcanoes down here - Lindsay
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:44:00 PM
Goddess Pele is alive and well living on the Big Island. Thank you much Lindsay. I enjoy your poetry so much. I hope you write a book one day. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 5/6/2016 10:10:00 PM
I see you won and I see why. I didn't know lava could be so poetic, but as you wrote it there's no doubt that it flows poetic in to talent that entertains. CayCay
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:40:00 PM
Hawaiians believe in and revere the Goddess Pele. There are many stories of her making an appearance even in present day, for she has the ability to change into a child, a beautiful maiden, a plain matron, or a very old woman. Some have even seen her appear as a large red dog. My daughter and spouse were driving on the Big Island and saw a lovely young woman with fiery hair walking along the deserted roadway barefoot wearing a long white gown, and as soon as they passed her they looked back and she had vanished.Thank you. ; )
Date: 5/6/2016 8:23:00 AM
TRULY AN EXCELLENT POEM MY FRIEND. Makes me wish I had written for that contest but haven't the time these days to enter many contests. Have always found your poetry a delight to read , be inspired by and think about.A7
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Date: 5/6/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thank you much Robert. I hope things are better for you now. Keep the faith my friend. ; )
Date: 5/5/2016 5:34:00 PM
Such incredible imagery Connie and so clever to write about the goddess of fire:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. To live near an active volcano is to be very aware of Earth's power. Hugs, Connie ; )
Date: 5/5/2016 5:12:00 AM
Connie, a lovely detailed description you've given of Pele, her hair and tears. Congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Elements # 4 -Fire contest!
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Balveen. My daughter just visited from the Mainland and so I have not gotten to comments yet. ; )
Date: 5/4/2016 9:48:00 AM
Congratulation on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you BL. You are so kind. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 5/4/2016 9:33:00 AM
Love this! Was just in Hawaii. Pele made it into a recent poem of mine too...
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I think I read it, but will double check. I love the way Pele is portrayed by the Hawaiians. My husband is Hawaiian/Chinese, born and raised in the culture. Let me know if you visit again. I would enjoy meeting you. Aloha, Connie ; )
Date: 5/4/2016 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations Connie on your placement in my Fire contest. Your write was so informative about a not all that well known Goddess of Fire and I especially liked how you explained Pele in asterisk at the end of your poem! Thanks for entering and producing great stuff in all the element contests
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for my placement and for all your wonderfully challenging elements contests that inspired me to create poems to enter Brian. You were very fair in choosing your winners, because I know as a judge of poetry myself, it was not easy for you. Aloha and Mahalo my friend! ; )
Date: 5/4/2016 2:19:00 AM
Excellent. Great sonnet. Well penned. Wish you belated happy birthday.
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Date: 5/3/2016 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine in the 'Element of Fire' contest, Connie. I knew it would place well. Also, I see from below...it's your special day! Happy Birthday, friend! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:24:00 PM
I'm here to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY , May 3 BABE!! If anyone is here today, wish our friend Connie a happy birthday!!
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:08:00 PM
Choosing the Goddess of Fire is a clever way to approach this theme, Connie. I really enjoyed this poem, and after looking up your link and reading about Pele's checkered history it becomes even more meaningful. gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:07:00 AM
Your Sonnet is so beautiful and well written, Connie. I love the theme you used to present this form of how fire shapes our earth. This should do really well in the contest. 7+Fav. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/4/2016 1:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra, for such a nice comment and especially for the fave. I really appreciate it my friend. Hugs, Connie ; )
Date: 5/2/2016 11:33:00 PM
Both beautiful and informative Connie...best wishes
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Date: 5/3/2016 2:40:00 AM
Thank you much Joseph! ; )
Date: 5/2/2016 3:06:00 PM
- Really beautiful in pictures ..... the forces of nature and delicious white sand beaches - A wonderful poem, dear Connie - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I always enjoy a visit from you. Happy spring. Hugs, Connie ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 10:58:00 PM
Dear Connie, U r always coming with something new. This is really a outstanding sonnet. I enjoyed every line. Best wishes for the contest.........hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot Manmath. Aloha, Connie ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 8:49:00 PM
wow, now THIS is thinking outside the box too, dear Connie. Great imagery and personification for fire (well, lava). Love it. SEVEN
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 3:03:00 PM
Well she is the fire Goddess! Thank you Andrea. ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 6:46:00 PM
Connie, this Sonnett is indeed a masterpiece! I love the amazing imagery, rhythm, and flawless flow of this piece. I am sure that it will rank highly in the contest. This fiery beauty deserves a 7! Hugs. Pandita
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for the 7 Pandita, and for your wonderful comment! ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 1:23:00 PM
Great sonnet Connie...it's on fire lol...GLIC...god bless...^WW^
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you WW. I appreciate the visit. ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 10:24:00 AM
A winner for sure:) love your out of the box poem here:) really awesome:) a 7:) I'm still thinking on what to write for this contest...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Jo. It took me a while to figure this out too knowing I had the limits of a sonnet. ; )
Date: 5/1/2016 9:20:00 AM
Lovely story Connie. My brother and a pilot flew over one of the Hawaiian volcanoes in a USAF jet while it was erupting in the 70s.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2016 2:58:00 PM
It looks best at night. Thank you James. ; )
Date: 4/30/2016 9:44:00 PM
Phenomenon, legend, science, nature, -- all woven into a beautiful poem...Enjoyed a lot...
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Probir. I hope you got to watch the video link. It is really wonderful. ; )
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