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Echoes of An Element - Elements Part 2: Wind Contest

Echoes of an Element (Elements Part2: Wind) Blowing bits of bark beneath the elements wings. Currents of cold air chill the country. Whispering wind that wallops in whispered screams. Howling through your home in hectic hospitality. Sweeping wind swept secrets such a solemn scene Creator of catastrophes curtains blown clean. Drifting toward dangerousness dirty dying deeds. Plucking all the potted plants by the patio screen. Triumphant in the turmoil that it causes tiny trees. Ecstatic electric element of this silent windy breeze.

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Date: 3/30/2016 6:24:00 PM
Great rhythm to this piece, and captivating imagery. "hectic hospitality" "triumphant in the turmoil" ... and I do wonder just how powerful this wind is that plucking up all your potted plants! Congrats on a great win, Damien.
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:42:00 PM
Hi Damien, Excellent treatment of the wind theme--really captures the power of the primal force. Nicely done and congrats on your win. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:02:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Damien .. big congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:15:00 AM
Howling through your home in hectic hospitality is such a great line especially for this poem! So glad you entered Damien well done n
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