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In frozen space there spins a marveled sphere On balanced perch with fettered care, aglow An artful system shields a fragile show And skillfully adjusts to nature’s veer Both land and sea work seamlessly to steer A nuanced waltz that sways with ebb and flow Ensuring life sustained is free to grow The tenants with the largest minds, I fear Are loath to gait their stride among the herd Entitled arrogance on proud display As man expands and subjugates with flair From greenhouse gas to ocean stress incurred The human race insuring its decay Tomorrow’s hopes and dreams, this folly snares 19 Apr 2014 Miltonic Sonnet abbaabbacdecde

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Date: 5/13/2014 8:14:00 PM
Be proud David! Well done and congrats. BG
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David Mohn
Date: 5/14/2014 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Barbara for the kind comment
Date: 5/13/2014 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on a great entry and win. Love, Joyce
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David Mohn
Date: 5/14/2014 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Joyce...greatly appreciated
Date: 5/13/2014 7:30:00 PM
Yup that what comes from believing in concepts like the dominion of man????Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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David Mohn
Date: 5/14/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Debbie...appreciate you stopping by and the comments
Date: 5/13/2014 2:56:00 PM
Excellent theme and well executed. My poor efforts on this theme don't come close. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautifully written sonnet well deserving of its placement.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:54:00 PM
Such a depth of truth in this amazing look at the world. Congratulations to you!
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David Mohn
Date: 5/13/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thanks so much for nice comments Carrie
Date: 5/13/2014 1:09:00 PM
David, , Congratulations:) in Craig's, "Miltonic Sonnet" contest... xox~ LINDA
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David Mohn
Date: 5/13/2014 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Linda :)
Date: 5/13/2014 1:04:00 PM
Way to go..# 2...Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:40:00 AM
Awesome write, David. Congrats, on your great honor. Elaine
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:44:00 AM
Great write David no doubt n in this tough form ! Subject Really a matter of concern to all ,, but pepl seem to be living in present , careless abt future,, god bless! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:57:00 PM
Very well tackled, technically and otherwise. Earth was made by an able creator, but man seems to be intent on destroying it! Deserves a high rating. // paul
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David Mohn
Date: 4/21/2014 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Paul...we sure don't seem to care much for the people coming after us
Date: 4/21/2014 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Mystic, it was fun trying a new form
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