Eap-Grandmothers

eap-GRANDMOTHERS A grandmother loves grandsons: in the womb, at childbirth and the times sad or with mirth by the soul without girth in the love, with no dearth © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 12, 2010 Inspired by Poetry Soup member contest: RHYME TIME Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 7:32:00 AM

this one also very nice, Dane Ann, and I forgot to say, thanks for reading my first senryu!! andrea

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/14/2010 1:36:00 AM

Beautiful rhyme, and much thought goes with this - my choice indeed! Anna-Marie.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/13/2010 7:02:00 AM

Well Dane,..my first vote goes here,..I'm partial to Grand moms !! james

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/12/2010 9:34:00 AM

And what a rhyme it is....Good one....:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2010 7:49:00 AM

Okay write on, Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2010 6:27:00 AM

This is my favorite type of write from you, Dane Ann! Your love of your family is what first sparked my interest in your writing and your book has many wonderful, inspirational poems! This is excellent and I wish you luck in the contest. Much love, Carolyn