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Dusk of Grey

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Dusk of Grey

On the outside, 
               the quiet dusk of grey

Sits the cloudy days
                      of our ending times

We won’t speak about it, 
                             it’s not okay

Your heart didn’t speak to me, 
                       it won’t chime

Nor will it bring relief
               on crush align

Not a piece of me
                       is left to be cleaved

Produced by this evenings
                             worrisome leave

Emptiness bellows on in, 
                       heartless pain

Our lives are darkly lit, 
               left to unweave

By the tailored look
                      of the devils mane

Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:25:00 PM
    a sure winner here, my friend

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Stunningly crafted Russell; all the best for Constance' contest ;) hope to see it on the winner's list. Really enjoyed reading this tonight! Enjoy whats left of the week as well.

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Interesting topic and presentation of the topic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits to my work..How are your family members doing?...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:14:00 AM
    oh my, russell... this is so melodious and sentimental... i feel the emoitons in my bones; so well put in a form that enables this write to shine, shine!.. wow, beautiful!...:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Fantastic! "Not a piece of me is left to be cleaved"...damn.

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:12:00 AM
    - Beautiful my friend Russell ! - Luck in contest!!!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 5:42:00 AM
    I really really like this, you make me want to try this new form, if you invented it, has off to you Russie, love it, xxx

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    Date: 8/6/2013 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops meant to say "Hats Off To You" I'm still working on my morning coffee and the eyes dey no looka so good as my italian grandpapa would say xxx