Home » Poems » Lycia Harding » Drunken Moon

Drunken Moon

•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Moon is hung over the same scene she lit last night washed out at sunrise ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/20/2018 11:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this creative haiku! Love it.

John Lawless

Date: 6/15/2018 5:59:00 PM

Ah, yes, the sotted moon lingering too long past dawn to squabble with the sun. Nicely done Lycia

Roy Pett

Date: 6/15/2018 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Lycia, very clever haiku. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2018 12:56:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Lycia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/15/2018 11:48:00 AM

Back with podium congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~' *

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/15/2018 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Lycia :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2018 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved top placement! I love this clever haiku! Excellently written! Hugs. Pandita

Constance La France

Date: 6/15/2018 8:48:00 AM

Lycia, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this lovely Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/15/2018 8:43:00 AM

I love this one Lycia! A potent gem of a little poem. Congratulations on your first place finish in my contest! Thank you for your support! xomo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:12:00 AM

Lycia, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/18/2015 5:33:00 AM

Thank you, Linda! xoxo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:46:00 AM

I enjoyed Lycia. Congrats.

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 10:51:00 AM

Hi Richard, Thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:25:00 AM

Congrats Lucia! Wonderful haiku!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:35:00 AM

Thanks, Doc!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:25:00 AM

Sorry the typo error in ur name Lycia!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:38:00 AM

O that's okay, I did it myself just this morning. heh heh

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 3:14:00 PM

Love the imagery Lycia....congrats Tim

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:35:00 AM

Thank you, Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 PM

Great seeing this one again. Congrats to you.

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, that contest was fun!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:51:00 PM

Love it. Well done, Lycia. Viv x

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:32:00 AM

Thank you, Viv!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:43:00 PM

Congrats great drunken moon : )

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:31:00 AM

Thank you, Lee!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:05:00 PM

Hi Lycia, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:26:00 AM

Thank you, SKAT. Excellent idea for a contest. Keep 'em comin!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 6:07:00 PM

Beautiful imagery a 7 Hugs Eve

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/7/2015 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Eve! xoxo

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/4/2015 11:38:00 AM

Wow. Very clever! You don't need luck. This will be on the winner's list!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I don't know, a lot of the heavyweights have entered this contest. We shall see, we shall see...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 10:04:00 AM

I came back to fave this one!!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:06:00 PM

Awesome! I love you're enthusiastic comments, they make my day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 9:29:00 AM

oh YES, that last line really sets this one apart!!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:05:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I was trying to write it so the last line would apply to each previous line independently while still keeping it's integrity as a tie up for both of them together. Does that make sense?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:36:00 PM

Lycia sounds like someone had a little too much. Awesome haiku. wishing you the best... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/4/2015 1:12:00 AM

You can call me Linda or PD Lycia, Destroyer sounds out of bound. By the way thank you for commenting my comment. :)

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/3/2015 7:08:00 PM

Yeah, maybe that's why she she's so bloated, huh? Ha! Thank you Destroyer. Xoxo