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Drifting Words Into Place

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Drifting Words Into Place

Letters like feathers blow 
into place...
Meanings are scribed in a 
sentence I embrace...
With my fingers I carve into 
pages made of sand...
Like an hour glass of time words 
fall from my hand...
However they look a poetic rhyme 
shall be free...
With just another angle from the 
mind and soul of me...

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:56:00 PM
    amazing piece..I am about to read more rom your pen..JuniperL

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:00:00 AM
    This was great writing. And the rhyming wasn't cheesy.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 4:19:00 AM
    wonderful poem, Michael, love the peace this seems to bring when reading.......

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 12:39:00 PM
    words flow with sentimental touches that lie in the heart, michael... much enjoyed!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Love your poem and it looks so evenly created. Must try and become more creative in my poetry. Thanks for the comments. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Michael , have you seen America's Got Talent this year? where this one man creates pictures from sand? They show what he is creating on a big screen and it's stunning. This poem made me think of that.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 5:38:00 AM
    nicely done.. I have really enjoyed your poem.. hugs have a great day cory

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 10:20:00 PM
    feel so good to read your wonderful write ,,,thank you Michael,,,for your great share :) luv SK

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:08:00 PM
    A very fine piece..I like the line about the hour glass the best..but , its all great. BG

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 4:25:00 PM
    a delicate weave of imagery with words of vivid depictions Michael luv .. always so fascinating to enter your sphere of amazing talent and incredible genius ..JG also very disappointed about boys in blue luv .. only team who lost in division .. oh kudos to Rosanna's Jets .. well wait for week 2 ..xoxo

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:59:00 PM
    love the last two lines they tie in beautifully, mind and soul of me, a gifted soul I might add, love and light vie

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:18:00 PM
    what a beautiful way to express your mind's and soul's desire in this delightful piece!! Love it! Thank you Micheal for stopping by my page and your kind words. Much love and light.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:27:00 PM
    This is a purely delightful write...I really enjoyed the powerful words you have scribed within this poem! What a lovely piece my friend, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 12:56:00 PM
    Good to see your poetic pen still delivers,Michael.Awesome imagery here,and speaks loudly of wisdom in between the lines.Have a great NY Sunday my brother! Arild