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Dreams Were Similar...

There was as a time,our dreams were similar now we perceive things,so unfamiliar, give us your hungry,your tired,your poor, is Lady Liberty being ignored? The cauldron of plenty,streets paved in gold dreams of a better life,being put on hold, freedom to exist with others so free but at what cost in measuring the fee... Simple status amid complexities static forms in verbal atrocities, ...there was a time our dreams were similar, let's not forget America's character...

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Date: 8/12/2010 3:54:00 AM
Jay, sometimes we forget the similarities, your poem is a great reminder.. thanks for sharing and your wise input on my "I bruise easily" write ;) Wilma
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:27:00 PM
nice,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/10/2010 4:19:00 PM
Smile ~ "Beautiful Song of Hope My Dear Friend" ~ I hope that "You Are Doing Well Jay Del Fierro" and, I loved the warmth of Your sincere message and thought amid this wonderful verse ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day My Friend;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:50:00 AM
Jay, thank you for sharing your wisdom with us today via your ever outstanding poetry. Love, Carol
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