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Dreams 'Modern Cinquain'

Dreams
Seem real
People we see
Gone but not forgotten
Inspiring

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/23/2012 12:48:00 PM

Thanks for always stopping by! Light & Love

Tanya Harrington

Date: 5/23/2012 10:31:00 AM

Nice, I like it. TLH

Gail Debole

Date: 3/21/2012 4:02:00 PM

Hi Carol - Love the simplicity of the way the poem is set up and yet says so much. - Gail

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/21/2012 5:30:00 AM

Light but heavy. Love this one.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/12/2012 8:51:00 AM

Inspiring, or a nightmare! ha! Isn't it funny how the mind works? I still have dreams about my best friend in high school who I haven't seen in over 15 years! So strange. Anyway, some dreams are very life-like - have you seen the movie "Inception"?

Joel Hunt

Date: 3/12/2012 8:08:00 AM

I lost a loved one this past year and it is hard to move on. Poetry helps.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 3/12/2012 7:56:00 AM

so very true my dear i hope your keep well you and your family love duncan,ceizar,and our sons

Dalila Agtani

Date: 3/12/2012 12:56:00 AM

Lovely Cinquain Carol. It is a short verse but meaningful. Thank you for your inspiring words at my work. Love Dalila

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2012 3:47:00 PM

This is so profound, so much said with so little. harry

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

Your Poems and words are getting deeper and deeper like the mystery of Life. The real beauty of your great Poems is their simplicity in which you take up the most vivid ideas of Life. Great write Carol as always and thank you for your kind words on my featured Poem. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carol Brown

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 8:33:00 PM

oh so true Carol.. this week I have dreamed every night of relatives deceased and beyond the realm of Earth.. thankxx for sharing this rare beauty of truth luv..

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/10/2012 7:12:00 PM

Lovely, I love dreams and remembrance, well done.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2012 7:43:00 PM

people who touch lives are always remembered... lovely read, carol...:) huggs!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/9/2012 3:24:00 PM

Lovely piece on our dreams, Carol. And so true

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/9/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2012 3:17:00 PM

I LIKE this, CAROL!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/9/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2012 1:17:00 PM

Yes, sometimes we have night dreams and sometimes day dreams where the deceased seem to come to us..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara