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Dreams Fall Apart

Raindrops striking your windows, commiserate with your pain. And simulating teardrops trickle slowly down the pane. You left home on an impulse, chasing love at seventeen. And although you trusted him, he abruptly fled the scene. Reality devastates you as you accept your fate. For your heart has been betrayed, and love has morphed into hate. Left all alone and pregnant, you cannot conceal your shame. And as your eyes fill with tears, you know life won't be the same. Your hands cannot stop trembling, watching your life fall apart. And anguish begins to gnaw at the insides of your heart. From a fetal position, you watch; as the heavens cry. And stare up at the raindrops falling from a sobbing sky. (Quatrain) 7/21/2015

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:53:00 PM
What strong imagery, Emile : "In a fetal position you watch as the heavens cry. And stare up at the droplets falling from a sobbing sky."
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 6:38:00 AM
You put this piece together perfectly Emile. Well done and Good luck in the contest. Hugs "B"
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Date: 7/22/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Be, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 4:56:00 PM
Emile, this is extremely excellent, you penned this wise and beautiful........A.M.
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Date: 7/21/2015 6:11:00 PM
Dear Afolabi, I'm touched by your words, thank you. Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 3:36:00 PM
Blessings come when there is sadness, bringing hope. With the child you will create new dreams and achieve happiness.
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Date: 7/21/2015 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 3:04:00 PM
You are one amazingly talented poet, Emile. I loved the smoothness of this write...the way it flowed from one stanza to another. Content is sad, but form and choice of words...awesome. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/21/2015 6:07:00 PM
Eileen, you always bring a smile to my day as I bask in the after glow of your praise. Thanks, Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 3:00:00 PM
outstanding imagery Emile you tell a wonderful story - i was hooked from start to end:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2015 6:09:00 PM
Jan I am touched by your words, thank you. Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 10:33:00 AM
Emile, this is a great story. One of heartbreak that happens over and over again. Hope this does well in an the contest.~Jan
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Janet, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

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