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Dreaming Into the Day

You waken from a dream of pure delight, relinquishing the magic of the night. But as you go outside, you find the hue of sky is now a technicolor blue! The grass and trees are greener; every flower possesses now a greater fragrant power. How sweet is everything! How can it be? The answer, friend, is very clear to see. When love has come to you, this is its way; enjoy it! You're dreaming into the day! 5/20/13 For 'A BRIAN STRAND 2 to 14 line ' Poetry Contest

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/17/2021 7:08:00 PM

It's a Beautiful Couplet. Congratulations on your Win!

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/17/2021 12:59:00 PM

Deep contemplative reading so profound, Andrea, tho' an oldie -- it is still gold my friend, Aloha!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 8/19/2015 10:34:00 PM

Excellent poem.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2013 9:44:00 PM

A nice poem about love. just have to try and catch up on some of your poem. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2013 2:34:00 PM

This one is so true. Beautiful write : )

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/22/2013 9:20:00 PM

Love how you made this title echo into the last line. SuZ

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/22/2013 4:42:00 PM

Love stinks! When it doesn't come your way. A dreamer dreams his life away waiting to dream into the day.

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2013 6:16:00 AM

well penned Andrea....best wishes

Watisungla Ao

Date: 5/21/2013 10:00:00 PM

I always believe in the power of love..nice write Andrea :) much love,watisungla

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/21/2013 8:04:00 PM

Andrea, I believe you have written something so true. Our disposition has an effect on the senses and the brain. I remember, and have said, that after 9/11 the world looked devoid of color to me. It's lovely to see something like this. Thank-you for what you do and thanks for your very kind comments.

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/21/2013 7:51:00 PM

Sure winner! You captured the essence of the theme perfectly. Love it!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 5/21/2013 6:56:00 PM

Everytime I read one of your poems I'm like does she have a book or what. Great poem poet

Len Gasun

Date: 5/21/2013 4:44:00 PM

This is a very beautiful inspirational poem which I enjoy and love to read this morning while the dawn is breaking here my dear friend, Andrea. A marvelous write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and my awesome win in your contest. I'm so glad you like my poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love lots, Leonora

Michael Ainsley

Date: 5/21/2013 1:35:00 PM

Love turns up the power and life vibrates with insight and beauty. Enjoyed your work Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 5/21/2013 12:49:00 PM

Yes! Love!! Da powah!Very dreamy write, dear Andrea. By the way - I have written a few Haiku with Kinkade as inspiration. I realize that you arteests look down on poor Thomas, but I like the light he puts into his paintings. Sincerely, Whistler's brother

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2013 10:32:00 AM

dear me, andie.. a breathtaking and tender write...it is so amazing that memories can be so vivid...thank you for recognizing my piece for your contest.. now you know why it took me just 5 minutes to do russel's about sundays...i was caught in this weekend mode... dream on!.. huggers!..;)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/21/2013 9:12:00 AM

ah love a many splendored thing and add in dreaming for a perfect recipe finely penned

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/21/2013 7:34:00 AM

Ooooh, a smooth and gentle ride. The very best of luck to you in the contest, Andrea. Licia :-)

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/21/2013 6:05:00 AM

And good idea about having a way to know if there are any poems on someone's page you haven't read...very good idea. As far as me...I might have a few you haven't seen, or you might have read every one. I'll check a couple out and if you have left no comment, I'll assume you haven't seen it. Then let you know which ones(if any!)

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/21/2013 6:00:00 AM

Lovely thought...and spacey idea(in the best possible way) for a poem. I think it'll do well in the contest for sure!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/20/2013 10:35:00 PM

Looks like someone has got the love bug... and enjoying the heck out of it. Loved this! At first I thought you were gonna turn this into a facade type deal and you suddenly awaken, realizing none of it was real... apparently that's not the case though! I look too deep into things sometimes...

Dom- X-

Date: 5/20/2013 7:31:00 PM

this is very nice Andrea! amazing imagery from the Purest light. soup-mail

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/20/2013 4:57:00 PM

Hey Andie! Hope you are well a perky little couplet. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2013 4:27:00 PM

Seems like I remember that being in love changed the way things looked but also realizing that it is good to be alive can make things seem much better..Thanks for stopping by ..I am glad that your really like the second stanza..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/20/2013 4:15:00 PM

This is one incredible and nature enhanced write my friend! I really loved this endearing, lovely dream poem Andrea! What a tremendous piece, a well thought out poem! You will do well in Michael's contest! Great Work!!