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Drat My Footle---A Fat Kaboodle

reduce caboose ___________________________ 8/18/14 For Andrea's Contest: "Let's Keep Footling Around"

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Casarah Nance

Date: 9/1/2014 1:23:00 PM

Grats on the win :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/29/2014 3:57:00 PM

So cute and clever. Congrats, Carrie.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2014 11:54:00 AM

Uniquely written..Congrats on your winning work!!! Sara

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/29/2014 10:05:00 AM

Very clever write - excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Congratulation on the big win! Pandita

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/29/2014 10:01:00 AM

This is one I love, and can relate to! lol, Congrats. BG

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2014 8:33:00 AM

Witty and catchy. Congrats, Carrie on a merited win. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2014 7:10:00 AM

- Congrats with a smile, Carrie - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2014 4:50:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/29/2014 4:44:00 AM

Hilarious! Like Andrea said, the title makes the whole footle...Do I dislike this? (My left footle!) Congrats my friend - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2014 12:36:00 AM

Carrie. I loved the title just as much as the footle itself. Clever girl!! Congrats.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/23/2014 3:10:00 PM

Good one, Carrie: These can be so funny and infuriating trying to come up with a good one... I made myself a little 'fridge magnet that states," Liitle Snax --Bigger Slax: lol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/20/2014 10:48:00 AM

OK I must admit, you got me checking what caboose meant (darn my brains are out this evening, I know I heard it somewhere before) now I know it is a railroad car or something like that-- that got me kinda stumped, and then I saw that it is slang for butt! haha, ok, that made more sense-- but butt some like big butts, right :p? This was sure was fun and witty, Carrie although-- please add the word "footle" in your title-- I think she was strict on her rules this time :) I still owe you some mail... <3

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2014 7:57:00 AM

great footle made me giggle:-) Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/19/2014 6:19:00 AM

this one has me laughing..mostly at my own caboose. BG