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Distant Dream Denmark -win

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Distant Dream Denmark -win

Life became a sweet song of morning lark As when Iris spoke to me from Denmark When first saw her in sensual style mark Young dreams reached a decisive landmark. The green days got an important bookmark, As I received the message from Denmark. Hoping life will become the rainbow ark, When Iris will come into my home park. My boat was on a smooth sail like a shark The soil was there, seed here hot and stark Needed the rain to sow but missed the mark Unlike Columbus sailed back with no spark. Dream stays with me, the emotions earmark Broken heart outlived joy of dream Denmark.
============================ October 6, 2013 Fourth Place win Contest: Lost Dreams by PD

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:15:00 PM
    awesome <3 SKAT

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Great imagery in this poem. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win, as well!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:02:00 AM
    This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Dr Ram, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. ------ always~ LINDA ~

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:27:00 PM
    What else can I do but parrot and echo the reviews of everyone else? Quite beautiful, indeed! :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Enjoyed the reading of this Dr Ram, I think you can't have lost out entirley from this episode..for one thing, we have another interesting write on soup..'

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 7:29:00 AM
    A beautiful poem.A dream will always be a dream but its always better to have a dream unlived than if you never dreamed before..Touching poem.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:36:00 AM
    A dream lived is better than a dream not lived at all! Fantastic monorhyme!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Beautiful dream of broken heart. Beautifully penned, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 6:37:00 AM
    - Beautiful Denmark my neighboring country! - It was nice written, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)