Disavow

A red sun peeks through spaces in trees.
Pastel lavender cast
'Pon the eastern horizon fair.
Beauty with questions unasked

Where has life taken our country
What future is there now
Only when our nation turns back
Or God will disavow

The sun changes to clear yellow
Bright its radiant light
It will warm the earth as always
Give life, take away night
  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/27/2013 2:59:00 PM
this is really nice and how you used nature to go with the strong ideas. WEll done!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2013 1:24:00 PM
Good time of the World is coming, I feel because whatever is happening, these are happening to bring good of the future. This beautiful World is not left by God to inhumanity and to cause all time's problem. Just He is watching and at the proper time He will do his own action. Your a great Country, feel it will always survive. Very nice poem. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2013 7:22:00 AM
I especially loved the second stanza, which is so very true in our world today, I believe we has started showing signs of destruction through the weather and political strife, as well as monetary problems! I really loved reading this incredible poem this morning! What a grand piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2013 6:42:00 AM
Especially loved the first stanza. Good piece and pleasant read. Kudos :)
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter