Disavow

A red sun peeks through spaces in trees. Pastel lavender cast 'Pon the eastern horizon fair. Beauty with questions unasked Where has life taken our country What future is there now Only when our nation turns back Or God will disavow The sun changes to clear yellow Bright its radiant light It will warm the earth as always Give life, take away night

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2013 2:59:00 PM

this is really nice and how you used nature to go with the strong ideas. WEll done!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/27/2013 1:24:00 PM

Good time of the World is coming, I feel because whatever is happening, these are happening to bring good of the future. This beautiful World is not left by God to inhumanity and to cause all time's problem. Just He is watching and at the proper time He will do his own action. Your a great Country, feel it will always survive. Very nice poem. Loved always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2013 7:22:00 AM

I especially loved the second stanza, which is so very true in our world today, I believe we has started showing signs of destruction through the weather and political strife, as well as monetary problems! I really loved reading this incredible poem this morning! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/27/2013 6:42:00 AM

Especially loved the first stanza. Good piece and pleasant read. Kudos :)