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Bitterness grays, as the years dwindle down Time chips away and memories fade Time,...slips away, nibbling at grief and years, without mercy, is also a thief My vision of you is harder to see, And try as I might,...it burns all the leaves Your beautiful face, the fire of you, Only flashes of amber.......there is only a hue I can't view the picture as clearly I did I can't turn it on like a light in my head It burns, lowly, dimly...just a flicker, instead I once knew your voice and the warmth of your smile Now there's barely a whisper in the dark of the night I try to reach out, and grab it somehow But it cools into embers, and memory fails Like a photograph lost, where it doesn't belong Fading each day, in the sun for too long Fading and losing the bright flame I knew I ponder the embers that have died in the flame And I wonder, and worry, it comes like a pain ......,will I know you, will you recognize me if somewhere beyond, we meet once again? ____________________________________________

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Date: 7/24/2015 3:19:00 PM
CARRIE, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:08:00 AM
Great write, Carrie, love that last stanza. Congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:45:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie! Quite an emotive write!
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win I really liked the change in form it created movement of speed in your poem,as emotions do when they rush out
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Awesome writing, thank you for entering my contest, it is a pleasure seeing you place ;)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/23/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Casarah ! It was an honor to place in your contest!! Thank YOU !!
Date: 7/23/2015 3:02:00 PM
such a heartfelt touching write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2009 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/25/2009 7:01:00 PM
Touching write. When my mother died I believed it was the worst that could happen until I went to a viewing for my neighbor's young son. Congrats Carrie on your very heartfelt write being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on having this very poignant poem featured. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:58:00 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you! adeleke
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Date: 7/22/2009 6:59:00 PM
Who could ever hope to beat you in a contest when you write such heartfelt, beautiful poetry! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:18:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem. I enjoyed the read. Ernilando
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Date: 7/19/2009 5:53:00 PM
wonderfully done ... congrats on the feature :)
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:40:00 PM
Carrie~Wow what a sad but sweet story that looks like a winner to me! Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! So well done I almost cried! Love Laura :)
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:56:00 PM
What a beautiful expressive thought. Grieving is such sweet sorrow. Congratulations on your selected feature. Bill
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week Carrie>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved write being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:27:00 AM
What a beautiful and sad poem Carrie.I know exactly how thatfeels. Well done for expressing it so well. Alison.
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