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Dijon Fantasy -Uc Contest Yellow Picture 4

The water, cloaked in the mist of a yellow dawn, Summoned souls to the shore of beguiling dreams. Sail true, My pilot, My hope, Into thy Dijon Fantasy. Written 3/3/2016 For U/C Contest Yellow Picture 4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Kate Davies
Date: 3/27/2024 12:24:00 AM
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A beautiful and immersive poem, If yellow can be a feeling it is what I felt reading it! I can see in your comments below that this was inspired by a painting, I would love to know what painting it was!
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:25:00 PM
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Charlie Smith, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 PM
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Linda I hope you were able to see the painting. That I had to use for inspiration for the piece. It makes mor sense seeing it. Thanks for the compliment. CWS
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 3/6/2016 12:01:00 AM
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Congratulations Charlie on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/6/2016 6:24:00 AM
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Very kind of you to say Hans, I hope you enjoyed the piece...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2016 2:26:00 AM
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Charlie, your entry is eloquent and very deserving of your top placement! Congratulations! #7
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/5/2016 6:13:00 AM
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You are most kind, thank you Connie
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Sathya Babu
Date: 3/5/2016 12:52:00 AM
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Many congratulations on your WIN Charlie.....:-)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/5/2016 6:12:00 AM
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Thanks you very much Sathya
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 5:17:00 PM
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very creative take on the theme many congrats on your win Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 5:34:00 PM
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Hugs accepted, Thank you so much Jan
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 5:00:00 PM
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Congrats on your placement in the contest, Charlie :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 5:29:00 PM
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Let's just keep doing this, you and I. Thanks, Dear
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/4/2016 4:12:00 PM
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Charlie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 4:21:00 PM
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Many thanks luloo
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 3/4/2016 3:49:00 PM
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i like your use of the word 'dijon' in this verse - congrats on your win in the contest!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 4:16:00 PM
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You're very kind Charlotte, thank you..,
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/4/2016 2:41:00 PM
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Wonderful imagery, Charlie. I enjoyed your poem and how you interpreted the prompt. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 2:53:00 PM
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I loved the inspiration. Thanks for your kindness, Sandra, it's most appreciated.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/4/2016 1:42:00 PM
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Enjoyed very much this poem Charlie. My best wishes for the contest.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 1:47:00 PM
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Thanks for sharing your time and your wishes with me...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:39:00 AM
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Charlie, this is beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 6:15:00 AM
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Thank you Broken Wings, you're most generous...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 12:14:00 AM
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This a very creative take on the visual that I truly enjoyEd, Charlie. Best of luck in the contest:)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2016 12:29:00 AM
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Thank you for your support. Thi is so very important to grow yout craft. A kind word goe's a long way...thanks Laura

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