Dieu a Fait La Femme

Geometry shows us God’s great fondness for lines
In the gazelles, birds and butterflies as well.
Everywhere we search in the midst of His designs,
Even in the sea we find many an animal in his shell.

Not stopping His ingenious design with mere creatures,
Or objects He fondly blesses with roundness,
That appear most often among celestial features,
He drew woman’s figure most curvy and boundless.

The womanly figures are of an exquisite selection,
Running the perfect outline from legs to hair,
Expressing haunting beauty with divine perfection,
And designed to please the heart willing to dare.

With circular lines it seems that He began
Depicting the face and hair with round design.
He moves then to the bust with a span,
And with symmetry amazes with the circular line.

Now on to the waist with its hyperbolic form,
He shapes with alluring symbolic notion.
Now cycling to legs God departs the norm,
And now straight lines obtain His promotion.

All of these sacred shapes and borders,
God draws from the world’s great sweep.
He conveys them from land’s four corners, 
Cross mountains high and valleys deep.

God is the master of geometric arts;
He is the architect of spherical dreams.
And He fashions woman’s celestial parts
From the lines on landscape’s four extremes.

Now all of this is just to make very clear
My prayer that you be my spherical dream,
With starlight in your flowing hair,
Your glory will fuel my modest esteem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/13/2010 10:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful writing here Albert ... when you jumped from face to bust however I was missing those sensuous lines of the neck ... LOL ... Congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup !!
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:22:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Albert. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:23:00 PM
Very complimentary and alluring write for all the ladies out there in poetry soup land. Keep the magical and complimentary pen flowing. Sara
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