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Diary Entry - Friday, March 09th, 2008

______________________ "I never travel without my diary, one should always have something sensational to read" Of life's trials and tribulations of wounds that seep of hope we search and of lose we struggle to release Entry Friday, March 09th. 2008 over and over replaying in my mind the last words spoken the last sigh cried I wander the ocean shore line empty.... I see the light fading grey.... with waves growing distant the tide rolls away.... over and over replaying in my mind the last words spoken the last sigh cried in thought, I drift.... ______________________ Contest ~ "The Diary" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Date: 4/19/2011 12:30:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your well deserved win with this very interesting write.Beautifully penned words..Best wishes,Gautami
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:33:00 PM
Warm congrats Rick for this wonderful write.
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Date: 4/18/2011 2:39:00 PM
Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Rick. Lainie.
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in The Diary contest with another superb write my friend.. enjoy a well deserved top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win ^Rick in Constance La France's contest "The Dairy". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:10:00 PM
maudlin just like ME! I like this it feel lavender the color of a bruise...Light & Love
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:36:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry ^Rick. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:06:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/4/2011 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:56:00 PM
Mesmerizing lines of sheer perfection Rick my friend.. flowing and fantastic is this piece..good luck in the contest with this elegance entry luv.. replaying in my mind the last words spoken.. so true ..luv..
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:31:00 PM
Lovely, evocative of painful love.
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