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devotion is something you give
to the living and the dead
devotion is something given
when the word love is said
it's not false or being mislead
it comes into being when
emotions are lead
when ideals in the heart
are being feed
devotion takes it's place
at the head
and all that follows
are simply lead
to the places in
the heart and head
eye's and ears where 
the heart see's and believes
words that were heard
that made the heart stir
touch and romance
that made the heart to sing
untold happiness did devotion bring

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  1. Date: 4/5/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Enjoyed this write on devotion. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Wonderful piece of devotion worded from different angles, loved and enjoyed. Thanks for showing my spelling mistake in my write and for your comment, bl

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 8:59:00 AM
    Devotion......One of the most beautiful committing word in the world..So wonderful to be here John.Wonderful to be home reading good friends..Charma :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 7:39:00 PM
    i take it toooo... devotion that is... but, mine is not unhappy... hope you are well...always,,p.d.

    Date: 1/18/2012 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm cold baby!
  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:48:00 PM sweet. Lovely and romantic !

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 2:53:00 PM
    So romantic...Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it as one of the ones that I could read today..Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:32:00 PM
    Beautiful written,John.Straight from your heart to the pen!

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Smile ˜ This Is Beautiful John ˜ Bravo ˜ Love, Me!:) ˜