Destiny - C

Fate's fickle fingers frequently foist frustration and fortune 'fore us ----------------- (C) John C Michaels, 2014

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/11/2017 8:09:00 AM

Good Morning John. May fate and fortune for the goodness of light and life reveal themselves to one and all. Well done and expressed.

John Michaels
Date: 3/11/2017 10:39:00 AM

Good fortune to you too, Lisa! Thank you for your kind comments!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 2:16:00 PM

Okay, this happens to be one of my favorite forms. Alliteration. Love the mix, destiny in a box... Love Linda

John Michaels
Date: 2/12/2017 4:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, Linda. Glad you liked it!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/19/2014 6:40:00 PM

An amazing write! Fickle Finger of Fate runs the gamete often.

John Michaels
Date: 2/12/2017 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I appreciate your kind comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2014 9:17:00 PM

I only like when they dish out fortune, but sadly it seems more of the middle line!!! Great alliteration.

John Michaels
Date: 2/12/2017 4:48:00 AM

Sadly, I think you're right. But hopefully the last line will come our way soon. Thanks for your comments (apologies for the delay).

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/10/2014 6:54:00 AM

John, I am blown away - this is a masterpiece! I don't think I can top this one, my friend! It is perfect in my books! Fireworks going off!!!!!

John Michaels
Date: 7/10/2014 8:14:00 AM

Wow! Thanks so much for the glowing remarks! I couldn't decide whether to submit this one, or my other Destiny haiku, for the competition... maybe I made the wrong choice :(