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Depositoria - Banks, First

drop a penny in the slot, drop it in the hole ”penny saved, penny earned” also “good for soul” my first piggy bank was tough like a tank until a hammer withdrew the whole

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/9/2016 7:15:00 PM

My piggy bank was a big glass jar which I dipped into too often, lol! Cute deposit/withdraw limerick lim'rik!:)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/10/2016 5:17:00 PM

yeah, saving was a concept I couldn't seem to grasp:-) cheerios! ~ j

Paloma P

Date: 11/9/2016 9:30:00 AM

My first bank was a Barbie, there was no hole, they're not anatomically correct. Kidding! ;)

Paloma P
Date: 11/9/2016 10:56:00 AM

Now you have me giggling out loud. :D Pyrotechnic poet, ha....! If there's a lim'rik in there, you can write it!!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/9/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks! Now I've splattered oatmeal on my computer screen! :-):-):-) Note to self: empty craw before reading volatile replies from the pyrotechnic poet. First bank of barbie! Still laughing, must be a lim'rik in there somewhere!