Demon Cursed House

A young family entered their new home A beautiful house, seemingly a steal Went on sale just weeks before they found it They immediately jumped on this deal Their furniture was already shipped here Waiting for them to move right on inside They never questioned why the price’s so low But they found out who will surely abide Family goes to lay down that first night Looking for a nice quiet, peaceful sleep Right after the couple’s eyes closed they found Sounds scraping and hearing a baby weep The father gets up to check the noises And walks down the hall to the children’s room They were all asleep, but a noise wakes them All of them walk the hallway into doom In front of them a demon walks the floor With a crooked, wry smile on his dark face A noise behind them shows some human ghosts They surely wanted to run from this space The family screams as they close their eyes Then the sounds abruptly vanish near them They look around, the daylight filters in They all are wishing this house to condemn Frantically they get ready to leave As the father is packing his suitcase He notices a photo on the wall Not of his family, it’s an old face When he looked closely fear enveloped him Seems they are the fearful ghosts from last night Demon was the old man in the picture They are still afraid even in the light Surely knowing now why the house’s so cheap They ran fast as they could away from there Never to look back at this evil house Let someone else live with this intense scare
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/9/2013 11:02:00 AM
will you kindly keep my blood pressure at a normal rate, russell?.. this is a frightfully beautiful story... terrific tale; i quiver... much enjoyed!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/9/2013 9:01:00 AM
NICE!!! Your tense & atmospheric stanzas continue on! I love it!
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Date: 10/9/2013 5:19:00 AM
If your intention my friend, Russell, was to scare us, I for one, Declare you have succeeded! Creepy and Spine-chilling!
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:37:00 AM
REads like the synopsis for one of those haunted house movies, Russell. The countdown to spook time is ON.
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