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DELUSIONAL DREAMS As dark clouds fill my mind, Their shadows cast over my heart, Like a clock, you cannot wind, Still ticking, but will not start. Paralyzed delusional dreams; The truth in me sleeps silently. In hibernation so it seems, To be awoken by your memory Past sceneries haunt my weary eyes, Your fragrance lingers in the heavy air, Echoes of your voice that cries, Memories of the smiles you'd wear, Voices of you and I, so much pain, Relentless mention I was so wrong I still see you in my forlorn brain I am so weak, you were too strong. *** Collaboration with White Wolf January 5, 2017

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Date: 1/5/2017 4:03:00 PM
so thought-provoking .. what a great team-up, darren and rick..huggs
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Darren White
Date: 1/6/2017 12:58:00 AM
Yes, we made a good team, and I love the result :)
Date: 1/5/2017 10:54:00 AM
Excellent collaboration guys...I really enjoyed this.
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Darren White
Date: 1/5/2017 11:01:00 AM
We did too, it was a good collaboration :)
Date: 1/5/2017 10:03:00 AM
Read this beautiful collab under Rick's page, Darren. It is a beautiful, yet intensely painful poem. Separation can be like this in a love relationship. Great write by you two. May love light the path to peace always.
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Darren White
Date: 1/5/2017 10:08:00 AM
It wasn't the easiest poem to write. It is beautiful I think.
Date: 1/5/2017 6:37:00 AM
Another great collaboration Darren and with another of my favorite poets. Bravo to you and Rick, this was wonderful.
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Darren White
Date: 1/5/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Chris, I am very happy with the result, we worked well together :)
Date: 1/5/2017 5:57:00 AM
Amazing collaboration from you guys! I love how the words flow... :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/5/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, this was so very good to do :)
Date: 1/5/2017 2:14:00 AM
Yeah, I like yours better! Haha, Plus you have a cool pic
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Darren White
Date: 1/6/2017 1:31:00 AM
I had to blink, and blink again, and thought: "this guy I so like to collaborate with has disappeared", but I am a huge fan of wolves, so welcome!
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White Wolf
Date: 1/5/2017 10:23:00 PM
It's just my twisted sense of humour, Haha /|\
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Darren White
Date: 1/5/2017 2:17:00 AM
LOL, how can it be better, it's the same :D

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