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I recall a dirty sidewalk running in front of grandma's house with bumps and cracks from the roots of ancient white oaks Meandering down to the levee with cane poles and sack lunches crickets and freshly dug earth worms Barefoot in careless summers I recall one low spot beneath a straggly Chinaberry filled with pitch-black delta dirt washed in by summer rains Shuffling through and digging down burying our toes Often now I recall when the heavens are shrouded in grief when darkness closes at the edge of vision I recall a porch light flicking on in the distance I recall grandma’s trembling soprano calling calling me back home

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Date: 4/28/2018 6:02:00 PM
Just learned of your death, dear Tim. I am back here seeing that I faved your amazing poem over a year ago. I hope you are looking down and seeing our thoughts about you at the blog your friend made for you. If anyone else lands on this amazing poem, know that its dear author is now in heaven.
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:42:00 AM
this is one I'd faved before. For me, one of the best! Congrats for a new win with it.
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Date: 8/10/2016 1:38:00 PM
The descriptions are marvelous -- kept thinks of Tom Sawyer, Becky, Huck Finn and Jim. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 5/31/2016 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulation my lovely friend for your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you for the Support...Tim...Linda
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:59:00 PM
Sounds like wonderful memories, Tim! Your descriptions make it easy to picture the scenes you have written about. An excellent write! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:24:00 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Tim!
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win in the Screwed contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:16:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your Screwed VIII WIN... Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 6/10/2015 4:25:00 PM
Hello Tim, best wishes on the placement with this southern memory filled write..'
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Date: 6/10/2015 12:17:00 PM
Keeping hold of recollections such as this one gives us something to fall on to when the present is looking gloomy. Congrats on your fine win, Tim. // paul
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 AM
Tim. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 8:34:00 AM
Those are the memories we cherish and are blessed to have. I remember well those lazy summer days spent fishing or swimming at our favorite spot. Congrats on your win, great poem!
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Date: 6/9/2015 5:04:00 AM
Beautiful memories Tim many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 9:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your nostalgic write, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:32:00 PM
good memories Tim keep them close congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:07:00 AM
Hola Tim, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/6/2015 10:47:00 AM
So beautiful and nostalgic, Tim. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
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Date: 4/5/2015 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Tim. This write activited all my senses. A Fav!
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Date: 4/5/2015 7:18:00 PM
A very lovely poem, Tim! This tender recalling brings back so many good memories of summer days spent at Grandma's house... Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:12:00 AM
WOW Tim, now THIS is the kind of poetry I love seeing from you. Nostalgia at its best with clarity and a superb final line. I'm gonna fave this one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:44:00 PM
What a warm, sweet memory. I love your poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:50:00 AM
My dear Tim, when you write like this, my heart moves like an ocean wave in your direction. As I have said before, I love your funny side, but this is what you were born to write. So, so beautiful, haunting and with deep longing.
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:35:00 AM
A wonderful and deep win Tim....linda
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:30:00 AM
tim, I'm commenting on your poem first as I've neglected you of late! I had no inkling that this poem was yours, but I liked it the very first time I read it...there's a poignant delicacy to this poem, and it's these sort of poems of yours that tell me that beneath the jocular exterior there is an extremely sensitive soul...(read my blog for what I have to say about the high standard of entries) - congrats on your win! :)
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