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Deliberately Unnamed, Unsigned , 2nd

Deliberately Unnamed, Unsigned , 2nd (SECOND OFFERING) Golden soft was the light that swiftly flew, As whistling rain pelted majestic oaks And the soaked birds began to cry for you As Nature silently wrapped up its cloaks Thirsty for coming dawn, so bold and new. Silver Maples fluttering in the wind, Where the fast sleeping rabbits hid away All beautiful, we wish to never end With brightened colors, every joyful day As Nature's beauty flows out to transcend. Deliberately Unfinished- Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 Total # Syllables: 100 Total # Lines: 13 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 71 ***************** ***************** Any poet can send me by way of pm here ten end-rhyming verses to complete this poem. I will then choose the several of best entries submitted to post as our collaborations. Poem will be titled by each chosen poet upon completion of our joint writing. Verses to be 4, 1, 4, 1 as shown Any questions feel free to pm me and I will answer. Edit_ Chosen from first collaboration offering, these three poems, now posted listed in order of completion. *** Betrayed Expectation with Paul Callus *** Heart and Wisdom of Olympus with Broken Wings *** "APHRODITE" with Teppo Gren' Sorry, Second offer now closed.... Third offer next week will be Romantic theme. Thanks to all that sent in second half conclusions! All were great....

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Date: 11/30/2015 10:03:00 AM
These six poets sent the required concluding verses on my second offering and now they have posted our co-writes. Not listed in any specific order as its not a contest, just a friendly offer from me , to write together. Each named poet did truly wonderful work. Sara Kendrick- Zephyr's Kiss Teppo Gren- Nature's Beauty Flows Out to Transcend Debbie Guzzi- Blessed Be Broken Wings- Deep In The Forest Richard Lamoureux- From Earthen Bed Jan Allison - Nature's Beauty, Wonderful World
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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/30/2015 10:05:00 AM
Seems Jan has yet to post ours but its coming. Please do check out the wonderful endings all these great poets gifted.
Date: 11/29/2015 1:51:00 PM
Robert, count me in, I love your opening verses, so poetically written, I will start working on my lines and hopefully can honor your words ~
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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/29/2015 2:47:00 PM
Thanks much, looking forward to your great rhyming verses my friend. Estimated completion time , 7 to 8 days. I am going to try to keep all these offerings under a ten day limit. A great honor to have your fine participation again my friend! I have no doubt about you presenting some great verses!
Date: 11/29/2015 1:50:00 PM
Okay!!! Get what you are saying..This is a very good work..Sara..I am working on one now..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/29/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks much, looking forward to your great rhyming verses my friend. Estimated completion time , 7 to 8 days. I am going to try to keep all these offerings under a ten day limit. An great honor to have you participate!
Date: 11/29/2015 10:26:00 AM
Ok Robert I'm on task! I'll get back to you ASAP. Light & Love
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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/29/2015 11:07:00 AM
Great my friend. First offering completed went so well and this one already has two now writing and 3 more inquiring. First three posted from completed offering - *** Betrayed Expectation with Paul Callus *** Heart and Wisdom of Olympus with Broken Wings *** "APHRODITE" with Teppo Gren'

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