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Defenders Endangered (For Free Style! Contest Sponsored By: Syed Amaan Ahmad)

Defenders Endangered Citizens unite spirits; choose the better part! Life, God given, stolen by greed’s black-heart. Industry progressed far beyond the pushcart. Thus, setting some selves apart as better…smart. The endangered protecting the endangered – Compassion fettered by solutions gartered The courageous, methodically hindered, Lacquered lives, wildlife “murdered”, man endangered. Watch helplessly, complaining; or take action! Bail out nature ravaged; write a new caption. “Defenders of Wildlife go for Gold Bullion.” Shield dying manatees, turtles, and sturgeon. Animals flailing, ruling leaders failing, Minds disarrayed, inside folks are crying. Did we get to this place wanting and buying? Priorities, pocketbooks…are folks lying? Take it to court to find solutions in short. Killing is no game…business…or sport. Drilling in the gulf BP must abort. Then pay to all people for life they did thwart. Struggles in nature hurt in various ways. The chow chain is altered…less food at buffets. The airways go stinking as wildlife decays. Meanwhile the culprits squander words on sashays. What will it take to make clean up occur? Will a boycott of products stop endless banter? Cook by the campfire; let adventure flicker. Keep sights on God; infrastructure may fracture. Lust not for things, but make God man’s desire. Cut back on comforts; let creativity inspire. Love one another; make family your empire. Or face the last days and the cleansing with fire. © Dane Smith-Johnsen May 29, 2010 Poetic Form: Rhyme (A series of four line monorhymes.)

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Date: 10/4/2010 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Dane
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:27:00 PM
p. 16 for winners. A great poem Dane Ann and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:50:00 PM
great message poem, Dane ann. very clever using the series of monorhymes too. Way to go! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:40:00 AM
This poem touches my heart, Dane Ann. Truly, man is endangering himself if he neglects to care for all God's creatures by adhering to environmentally sound practices. Like the monorhyme stanzas approach! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:58:00 AM
What a wonderful write and how sad the message it so true. Best of luck in the contest, dear heart. Constance
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:31:00 AM
Dane Ann, a wonderfully profound message in a beautifully written way - Loved it - YF4L, God Bless, mj
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