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Deception

Hand in hand and Eyes to eyes, Promises unending As if from the heart, Pregnancy struck Then hand out of hand And eyes apart from eyes Leaving the girl in stark anguish... BY: CHARLES MELODY (LIGHTNING INK).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/22/2011 6:54:00 PM
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Date: 7/28/2011 3:35:00 PM
Sad but very true, so many flee from responsibility. Well written!!!!!
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:52:00 AM
There can be that type of deception. For what was thought to be love falls apart when pregnancy strikes. So true are these words. In first line leave out the -and- otherwise an excellent write. love mom
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:49:00 AM
thanks mama

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