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Below is the poem entitled DECEPTION which was written by poet Charles Melody Lightning Ink. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Hand in hand and
Eyes to eyes,
Promises unending
As if from the heart,
Pregnancy struck
Then hand out of hand
And eyes apart from eyes
Leaving the girl in stark anguish...


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  1. Date: 9/22/2011 6:54:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 3:35:00 PM
    Sad but very true, so many flee from responsibility. Well written!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 10:52:00 AM
    There can be that type of deception. For what was thought to be love falls apart when pregnancy strikes. So true are these words. In first line leave out the -and- otherwise an excellent write. love mom

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    Date: 6/21/2011 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks mama