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Death of a Vampire

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Death of a Vampire

She had the most haunting eyes
She was evil in disguise
She slept peacefully throughout the day
At night men would become her prey

Her lips were so erotic
Her smile was hypnotic
I had to ignore the sensual feeling
She had a body so appealing

I asked to meet her in the sunlight
She said she preferred the twilight
I asked her why not during the day
She replied I’d rather not say

Then she whispered I’ll leave you never
If I bite you, you’ll live forever
She said biting a man’s neck thrilled her
But she bit a lawyer and the poison killed her.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2009 11:30:00 AM
    Had me chuckling at the end Vince, nice write>>James

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 12:23:00 PM
    nice poem. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 7:39:00 PM
    Oh, you really had me going, Vince! Didn't expect the lawyer joke at the end of this spooky vampire love story. Great work! This "haunted poets" game is such fun; I'm glad to see you posting! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 7:04:00 PM
    Vince! I love this scary poem!!! and Vince! I'm so, so, sorry not remembering your limited on-line time, when I passed the challenge to you!!!! mail....

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 6:14:00 PM
    That was hilarious Vince! Good thing she didn't bite you! LOL!-AA

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 4:51:00 PM
    This was a very cool poem. I loved the rhyme and the scary atmosphere. I'm 11, I'm new here, and I hope you'll like my poem, too!Love ya! X's and O's -Amber <3

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 12:44:00 PM
    YEP !! That last line is a killer !!! Sooo funny!! Beware of all lawyers!!! I've heard of ambulance chasers.....but not vampire chasers!:)