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Shooting Death In the Street

fleeting moments in streets that fled the snares even till they wink they kill sun or night disheartening images left behind, unrespect youth but outcast nothing fetched ignorant truth doth give to discontent need to get rid that lords over their fears attend to bridge the deep and outer self henceforth be the journey long and painful to morrow plant newly sharpens love edge war and violent hands shall nullify mute the waste, light the way and hope for peace that thou shalt comfort orphans left behind 12/2/201

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/18/2016 10:46:00 PM

Wonderfully stated.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2016 11:47:00 PM

Thank you, Afzal, something needs to happen to get rid of the guns on the street

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/7/2016 9:57:00 PM

Hi Eve. As Alexis said a Heart felt piece, I am afraid this is the world over these days and yes we do hope for peace but it certainly won't be in our time, I do tend to worry about my grandchildren and their future but as they say that is life, a 7 for this one my dear. Take care......Vera

Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2016 11:07:00 PM

I share your same feelings about my children and grandchildren. We can hope Hugs eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/4/2016 10:01:00 AM

Hi Eve, You've penned such a heartfelt piece. It's so sad to see our world in this state. However, I shall never tire of hoping for peace for our world.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 6:33:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year