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Fallen Contest

Lovely lady was my rock instant hero from birth fell into the fire of addiction love became a curse suicide breaking our bond broken loyalty, her pulse, just couldn't respond My sister, Karen 30 words ~Laura Urbaniak~ ~Fallen 25-30 Words Contest~ ~Date: November 29, 2015~

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Michael Tor

Date: 12/4/2015 10:34:00 PM

Im so sorry for your loss Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 1:31:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Michael...-lu

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/4/2015 9:33:00 PM

Wonderful write Laura n so is ur win.. big congrats!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 9:50:00 PM

Many thanks :)-lu *smiles*

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2015 8:09:00 PM

Laura, sweet win--- SKAT

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 9:00:00 PM

Thank you SKAT:)

Lin Lane

Date: 12/4/2015 7:21:00 PM

well done, Laura...congratulations.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 8:16:00 PM

Thank you Lin:)-lu

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2015 7:04:00 PM

wow, this is really sad. I agree with Rob's comment on those last two lines!!! Congrats for the win.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 8:16:00 PM

thank you Andrea very much :)-lu

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/4/2015 6:19:00 PM

Congrats Laura. Those last two lines kick ass.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 8:15:00 PM

Thank you Rob :)-lu

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2015 4:26:00 PM

so moved by this sharp write, laura..sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 4:31:00 PM

I owe you a HUGE thank you for considering my poem to be placed in your wonderful contest. THANK you so much...-lu

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2015 4:14:00 PM

oh Laura I am sure I commented on this before - the drugs situation has hit me very hard with our friends 2 sons dying just a year ago:-( many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 4:33:00 PM

The loss of the 2 boys was a tragic accident LU - sadly when you dabble with drugs you don't know what you are taking or its potency - such a heartbreaking situation for those left behind to grieve:-( hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan, you really are a sweet woman all the time. Everyone we know knows someone who has taken their own life...Be blessed -lu