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Dear, I Can Do Better

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Dear, I Can Do Better

You can sit there
Glare at me with your frown
Dear, I can do better
All you do is drag me down
Your words don’t hurt me
I’ve grown accustomed to their use
I’ll ignore you
So I don’t deplore you for the abuse
Your forced tears don’t faze me
As I’m walking out the door
Today, I awoke to realize
I don’t need you anymore

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  1. Date: 4/8/2011 4:30:00 AM
    I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today David. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:54:00 AM
    So much emotion David in so few lines.hurt, anger and resilience expressed so well.Another one of your poems that I like.I hope that either you or this person finds longlasting love and happiness soon. Love June.

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:06:00 AM
    Strong deep write my friend...