Wonder

Weightless then, I tiptoe on sand One to wonder on her strips of gold. Naming each leaf that curls up to rest Dressed in fabric of glossy strands; Ever gracious, earth’s harvest brims twofold Reeling, I am fed by musings' honeyed fest! ------ You Are My Inspiration Contest of Patricia Ellis By nette onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/8/2012 2:54:00 PM

Was your own imagination your inspiration?Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2012 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Patricia's "You Are My Inspiration" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/8/2012 9:25:00 AM

A double score - congratulations on an inventive and lovely poem.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/8/2012 12:44:00 AM

very beautiful poem friend Nette. Congratulations!! (^_^) hugs!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/8/2012 12:15:00 AM

Beautifully written Nette! Congrats on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2012 10:59:00 PM

Nette a dazling array of imagery, passion and inspiration. Congratulations on your wonderful win! You mixed the two forms beautifully. (applause)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/6/2012 5:08:00 PM

Line 6 my fave, Nette....thanks for visiting....jimbo

David Williams

Date: 10/6/2012 10:41:00 AM

Nette, very nice images this creates, just wonderful, nice to read your work again, have a peaceful weekend...David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2012 10:38:00 AM

Nette, a wonderful acrostic. .enjoyed your poem~ have yourself a nice day~ XOX *PD

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 9:02:00 AM

Beautiful! Love this line... "freely riding with tassels of wind" A lovely poem, Nette! Hugs, Jack xox

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2012 9:00:00 AM

TALENT OF THE GODDESS OF PS WITH MELDING TWO FASCINATING FORMS CREATING A VIVID PORTRAIT OF INSPIRATIONS NETTE LUV .. TOP SPOT WINNER .. AN AMAZING AND OUTSTANDING POEM ..

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2012 6:47:00 AM

Wow, Nette, this might be your best write you've written in recent weeks my friend! I am very impressed with your eloquent emotions you put to the forefront with this incredible poem! I really enjoyed the delightful write you have written, with daydreaming all present deep inside the poem! This is a very well written Italian Sonnet, I haven't seen very many of these and those that I have read have not been as awesome as yours is! A masterfully written poem! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!