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DAYDREAM WONDER

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DAYDREAM WONDER


Dew drops of sunlight hum on sills As Mother Nature trails, to flow, Yearning for hours of her laced glow Dreams swirl in times of enchanting thrill. Rare like my inspired mind for life's refill Effervescent aisles run where blue lilacs grow; And to saunter in new worlds I'll never know My, freely riding with tassels of wind, mellowed. Weightless then, I tiptoe on sand One to wonder on her strips of gold. Naming each leaf that curls up to rest Dressed in fabric of glossy strands; Ever gracious, earth’s harvest brims twofold Reeling, I am fed by musings' honeyed fest! *Acrostic and Italian Sonnet ------ You Are My Inspiration Contest of Patricia Ellis By nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:53:00 AM
    You are dangerous.....your brain, is a brilliant one! Before I enter a contest, I'll have to check in with you; beauty can be intimidating. This is the proof!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Was your own imagination your inspiration?Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 11:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Patricia's "You Are My Inspiration" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:25:00 AM
    A double score - congratulations on an inventive and lovely poem.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:44:00 AM
    very beautiful poem friend Nette. Congratulations!! (^_^) hugs!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:15:00 AM
    Beautifully written Nette! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:59:00 PM
    Nette a dazling array of imagery, passion and inspiration. Congratulations on your wonderful win! You mixed the two forms beautifully. (applause)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:08:00 PM
    Line 6 my fave, Nette....thanks for visiting....jimbo

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 1:31:00 PM
    Hello dear,my name is Arild,i came across your profile on this Site..etc..etc..Don`t they ever give up? Yesterday we were pounded by amanda ha..and today we have Ms Goodluck:-) Btw,loved your acrostic and how genious to mix it with an Italian Sonnet! Have a splendid weekend dear Nette:) Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Nette, very nice images this creates, just wonderful, nice to read your work again, have a peaceful weekend...David

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:38:00 AM
    Nette, a wonderful acrostic. .enjoyed your poem~ have yourself a nice day~ XOX *PD

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Beautiful! Love this line... "freely riding with tassels of wind" A lovely poem, Nette! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:00:00 AM
    TALENT OF THE GODDESS OF PS WITH MELDING TWO FASCINATING FORMS CREATING A VIVID PORTRAIT OF INSPIRATIONS NETTE LUV .. TOP SPOT WINNER .. AN AMAZING AND OUTSTANDING POEM ..

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:47:00 AM
    Wow, Nette, this might be your best write you've written in recent weeks my friend! I am very impressed with your eloquent emotions you put to the forefront with this incredible poem! I really enjoyed the delightful write you have written, with daydreaming all present deep inside the poem! This is a very well written Italian Sonnet, I haven't seen very many of these and those that I have read have not been as awesome as yours is! A masterfully written poem! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:01:00 AM
    I dream me far away in your beautiful poem. - Luck in contest !!!! Wishing you a lovely weekend, Nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:01:00 AM
    You took me to another world....far away from here......

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:00:00 AM
    Just wonderful Net,I mean Nette!!Amazing!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:56:00 AM
    My Nette connection failed!!I mean Net connection.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:36:00 AM
    Tring!Tring!Tring!