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As i lay upon this sand
Beneath the light of sun
I walk within the midst of clouds
Only to touch,not even but one

I see the riseing cliffs
And the forest in loom beyond,
The lakes of sparkling waters
That reflect the mornings dawned

I spy the grounds below,
And the sand on which I lie
For to this place I must return
Again to hover,amid these museful skies...

ps i just wanted to try and write something greeting card-ish.it is kinda fun...

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  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:50:00 PM
    Very beautiful scene u set Gary.. and have painted in your words.. I luv the beach.. am on the Amalfi Coast with my new hubby in Italy so the beach is wonderful here.. enjoyed your creativity tonight luv.. ciao..

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:18:00 AM
    very well written,it was enjoyable to read

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 6:07:00 AM
    great write my friend... very enjoyed..Michael