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Dawn the Stalker, part 3

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Dawn the Stalker, part 3

She devoted her time to poetry and blogs
Addressing his many nonexistent flaws
As if his was the family, being neglected
While she refused to address his rejection
And became something too sad to even mock

You see, Dawn had succumbed to her invective
Unmedicated and overprotective
But of all the wrong things -
The lies about herself she struggled to maintain
And an impossible dream objective

And so, Dawn rots away
Her own twisted mind's slave
Spending time on a man who will never love her
Of whose affections, she is quite sure
While the ones who do care about her are estranged

She thinks only of herself
And ignores her child's wails
Mocks her husband's needs
She is the epitome of greed
And of failing mental health

Her words against him are an inner reflection
Of the emptiness that has become her own life's direction
She gets more repulsive as she pines away
And her husband is tempted to stray
But she thinks he is a fool to her deception

And most of us caught in her narrative live on
While she babbles like a moron
Taking her hate and lies wherever she can
To try and further convict an innocent man
Oh, what a sad old witch, that Dawn!

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  1. Date: 4/13/2011 12:30:00 PM
    My name is not Susanne Moyle. There are dozens of pictures of me online with various hair colors and with my dog at different ages. People will confirm who I am. The woman you email no longer replies to you and is the ex wife of someone who joined your forum you decided was Brendan because you have to believe that he is the one, obsessed. GET A LIFE.

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 12:29:00 PM
    I was under the impression you couldn't use such language, here. And yet, I'm not trying to get you removed from the site. Go figure! My goal is not to take your creative outlet, but I DO suggest if you want to keep trashing people, you do it under an alias or in private. Or learn to cope when people don't just smile and nod.

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 11:29:00 AM
    such a liar susanne fucking and brendan moyle liars..inflicting now your shit on my sister, I speak to brendan moyles x wife via people never cease..

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 8:05:00 PM
    Peace. Out.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:56:00 PM
    I am not here under multiple personas. That is patently ridiculous. Any honest look at our comparative poetry should reveal that. I don't care so much about Dawn stalking my friend, that I'm going to waste time, opening multiple accounts here and changing my writing style. You need to work on not believing every single thing a bone fide certified lunatic has to say, to be frank. I mean, that does sound mean, but let's be honest, here. I'm VERY good at honest.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:51:00 PM
    Cyndi, just as a matter of record, many of us tried very hard to let it "fizzle" away. But your sister keeps coming back. She's contacted my boyfriend, my employers, and she erroneously believes I'm about a half a dozen other people out on the Internet. If you truly care about your sister, please tell her to drop it.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:51:00 PM
    ..wife or children. If that's her way of "coping" (with the abuse she's brought to HIS life, not vice versa), she needs to make it private or something. And yes, my full, real name is posted here. I don't need this drama to unfold in my comments, either. I WANT the problem to go away. Again, I suggest a diary or something. Or maybe a fake name, I dunno what to suggest.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:49:00 PM
    No, you don't know "how this started", because it has nothing to do with my lack of faith. And I just found out last night that Dawn had a sister at all, I made NO attempt to contact you, you might note. Didn't read your poems, didn't look you up, nothing. Yes, I want the problem to end. So maybe suggest she get a diary or something instead of airing her dirty air on public forums. Because I can't even tell you how inappropriate and disgusting it is, for her to write poems as if she's this man's

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:46:00 PM
    (I've been accused of being him, by the way, and also one of his past lovers. Oh, and Satan, himself! She also made a public blog, calling me and addict and alcoholic - neither of which were true.) 4) She is still writing about them, to this day. That is not past tense. By the way, these poems don't have Dawn's last name in them, so technically, I'm not "mentioning her by name", either. She could have blocked me and not commented, here.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:45:00 PM
    Your real name is Mindy?

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:43:00 PM
    Finally, you are feeding the problem, but that is what you want, right? You don't want it to end (your words:I won't let her get away with). What I see, in Dawn, is someone working through pain, while as you seem to be INSTILLING IT. You have family, so I'm taking a gamble that you might have some kind of insight as to why I stand by my sister. She and I don't agree on everything, and seeing as you're an athiest I think I know how this started. Still, you can withdraw and let this fizzle away.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:42:00 PM
    1) In what way have I disguised myself? 2) My friend HAS done everything in his power to stop her (ongoing) stalking behavior. But he has limited abilities, there, because he's in NZ and she's in Canada. 3) Those who are being talked about in her poems know that she's addressing them and are therefore still being victimized by her version of "gossip" about events that never actually happened because her "prophecy" is actually trash she's dug up from dozens of people she thinks are one person.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:36:00 PM
    To finish- and after this I AM finished- I repeat we all have choices. You seem to believe that you are a good person. I don't know you. You don't know me. But I do know that in my sister's life - with all the pain and trauma and horrors and abuse she has received, it's a miracle that she's even alive. I will not divulge confidences - especially someone so bent on vengence. Gee, you are here under multiple personas is it any wonder she is "scared people she thinks ae him" or you etc...

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:29:00 PM
    This is what I know so far 1) you disguise yourself in a "public forum" 2) It should be up to your "friend" to take care of himself. I love my friends but would never hound others as you appear to be doing. 3) Dawn's postings tell her own story her own way without naming names. Those wandering onto this site would have no idea who she is referring to- unless of course others like yourself are following her too 4) Every verb you used is PAST TENSE - while what you are doing is present tense.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:08:00 PM
    (to Cyndi, cont'd) So no, I am not stalking Dawn by going to a public online forum. Not even close. But I won't let her get away with casually destroying my friend's life and writing disgusting poems as if in the context of his children, either. (Based on the "prophecy" of his losing his job over the email she sent - which didn't happen, by the way - at least not the part where he lost his job.) If she wants to spread trash, she better prepared to be hit with reality.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:07:00 PM
    Cyndi, you seem to be confused about what the word "stalker" means. This woman has posted my friend's address online, contacted his work, lied about being terminally ill to get his brother to add her on facebook and try to get info on him, gone to sites where he collects partial income and lied in the comments about his personal life, harassed and scared people she thinks are him and gets their accounts deleted, etc.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 7:58:00 AM
    If SHE is the stalker then why did YOU follow her here- because according to the new poets board YOU are the new member. It would seem that YOU are following her, not the other way around. We all have choices to make. You can persist or discontinue--and based on your choice, what does it say about your behavior. Hate is a circle. You can chose to break the pattern. Or not.

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 1:16:00 PM
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  1. Date: 4/11/2011 12:57:00 PM
    John, I enjoyed your comment! These poems came to me rather quickly, and are indeed a mirror to the drama this woman has brought to my friends' lives. Nonetheless, I may try some more serious poems... (If my account isn't unfairly removed, that is!) It's just hard for me to take myself so seriously and think I'm that important or interesting, y'know?

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 12:12:00 PM
    Smile ~ You know, many times these days when I come to this place called PoetrySoup, I feel as though I have been given a front row seat unto a magical comedy show...thus, let myself stand and applaud yet another moment in times, who's afraid of virginia woolf's poe soup adaption; of course, with a slight lime morning glories twist -- clap clap clap -- "Love, 'Always,'" John! ~ Ps. Smile, "And The 'Oscara' Goes to, ??? -- 'You; Take A Bow.'" ... *_# ^•^ *.* :) ~