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Dawn Burst Forth, Earth Was Drinking Its New Rain

Dawn Burst Forth, Earth Was Drinking Its New Rain Dawn burst forth, earth was drinking its new rain Had I been asleep-in dreams far afield In soft slumber, void of my usual pain Or merely hiding behind my sword and shield Sun cast its plentiful, dazzling new rays Down on longings of a miserable man In this dark, dark cold-world everybody pays O' to escape again, if only I can Evening shadows now wrap my soul in stone Even as black darkness races to invade Shielding me from hard hits and broken bone And all righteous punishment I have made Midnight's hours battled, promising to save An unworthy soul from an early grave R. J. Lindley, Jan. 20th 1979 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 11 11 0 10 11 11 11 0 10 11 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 146 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 104 NOTE- Poem is presented as it was written decades ago, syllable count be damned. I will no longer make edits on my original works written decades ago just to meet such an overbearing and restrictive ban upon true poetic flow and a poet's heart.. Henceforth any of my old poems will be presented here , as I, in my youth cast them onto paper! The world be damned!

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Viv Wigley

Date: 9/21/2016 12:55:00 AM

Robert, you have always said that you are not a stickler for form, but you are true to the spirit of the Sonnet, which is the important thing. Often content is paramount and must take precedent. Poetry is fluid- it has to be, or it stagnates and constricts. A fine write, and may you rise victorious in your struggles. Regards, Viv

The Grahamburglar

Date: 9/19/2016 1:56:00 PM

Form is for the pedantic. Certainly, there are times, when rising to the challenge of using a form is, itself the creative process, but my personal attitude is that when the form becomes a distraction, and it begins to unnecessarily constrain my creative process, it is far better to set aside the form then to set aside the message I was trying to convey. I agree with Victor, no explanation necessary. You're a poet, and poets are, if nothing else, flexible. =) -G

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/19/2016 11:30:00 AM

love to see you after a long time,this is so powerful as a piece and rock-solid is its structure.Don't worry for edits you are already perfect Sir Robert.