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Darn You, Mister

(25/12/2011) Darn you, Mister! You drag my heart to yours Chain my heart and throw the key Force me to be your shadow Darn you, Mister! You sit me on your deepest heart’s layer And hug me even harder As if I will leave you suffer Darn you, Mister! Don’t you know? Unnecessary to beg me To bow to you, Is what I’m willingly to do 7th place in P.D.'s Contest 'Free Verse' :D

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Date: 4/27/2013 10:48:00 PM
Sounds like the greatest complaint to have, Dinda. Not much to argue about when you find someone you practically worship... haha. Loved the attitude in this!
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:53:00 PM
This is great!...Writing of relationships whether real or fiction can sure get the audience stirred up! :0 The heart sure don't need coercing, does it? ....Glad the Poetry Notebook poem caused you to pause and think about what this 13 yr old girl must have suffered thru Hitler's Final Solution...that was the intended purpose...They were masterful at invoking fear and made lil rats and puppets out of them! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:15:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on your win with this amazing write.
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Dinda. Love, Carol"
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:50:00 PM
DINDA~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:50:00 PM
congrats Dinda on a wonderful write and win luv..
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:40:00 PM
oh, here is one I somehow missed. This one sounds like it goes with some others I read here!! That guy is a real louse!! Dinda,I 'm happy to know you made up that other poem. you made it sound very real!!(which a good thing for a poet to do)
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:19:00 PM
good show of emotion here - I like how you're cursing him and loving him at the sanme time :)
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:04:00 AM
A direct and engaging write :-)
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Date: 1/21/2012 1:18:00 AM
wow! you go girl, just say it outloud. i can definitely feel you now
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