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Dane Marked

My life became a song of lark When Iris spoke to me from Denmark When I first saw her getting embark My life reached a decisive landmark. My life got an important bookmark, When the message came from Denmark. My life will become the rainbow arc, When Iris will come into my park. I long for Iris in my garden to empark, Feeling her in my touch question mark, The soil is there, the seed is hot stark, What needs be is a single spark. =============================

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Date: 5/29/2010 7:08:00 AM
Wonderful piece Dr.Ram, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:24:00 PM
A witty presentation Doc, Congratulation on your success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/28/2010 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this challenging contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:22:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carolyn's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:51:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in the Monorhyme contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy a special honor for a well deserved winning poem.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:13:00 AM
Lovely images in your monorhyme, Dr. Ram. Couldn't find a definition of "empark" but enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:04:00 PM
A very enjoyable monorhyme Dr. Ram :) having that particular ending probably wasn't easy to write but you made it look effortless :)
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Date: 5/27/2010 12:22:00 PM
thankxxxx Dr. Ram and hope u will also comment on my blog for the military and the holiday as I sent the comments to my young son Eric in Iraq.. appreciate.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 9:15:00 AM
Dr. Ram, enjoyed reading this remarkable poem with a spark! And thank you for your kind ongoing comments on my poems...All the best!...Gert
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:46:00 AM
Dr Ram is this for the contest Monorhyme? A unique ideal, you have going. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:39:00 AM
WELL DONE, DOCTOR. HOPE YOU FIND THAT SINGLE SPARK WAITING FOR YOU.-SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:26:00 AM
"Who is Sylvia?" A famous song by Schubert. "Who is Iris?" She has you hypnotized. Love it, Doctor. Love, daver
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:14:00 AM
What a delightful poem....I love this clever wording...Nicely done. Iris....this was my mother's favorite flower!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:28:00 PM
OH, a DAne from Denmark. I get it! They are called Danes there, right? That's a cute one. The name Iris is cute too. LUv, andrea
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