Dandy

Dandy Dandelion at the slightest wind Takes flight and won't be back again He releases his seed all over the place Progenitor here and there for goodness sake

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2013 12:59:00 AM

this is cute. I wrote one a long time ago like this, just a few lines. Dandelions are sure interesting, aren't they?

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/18/2013 2:35:00 AM

Reading your poem I feel like Dandy Dandelion flying in the sky releasing optimism and goodness. Magic poetry!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2013 2:51:00 PM

Such a thing 'eh Sara.. ole dandlion and leaves falling grass growing, wind sun all these marvelous things and we can see them; somtimes not realising the privelige we have good reading today..'

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/17/2013 6:14:00 AM

His seed:the ticket to eternity for Dandelion! A flower like verse full of beauty and immortality!

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/16/2013 2:07:00 PM

A dandy write about the plight of something that just aint' quite right. Green and yellow should go together. But most mankind awaits the change in weather. A dandy speads his seeds so thin. The rest of us don't know where to begin. Thanks for stopping by Sara. Peace. :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/16/2013 11:51:00 AM

Dandy Dandelion releases seeds for future generations. Wonderful poem enjoyed. Thanks........,loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/16/2013 9:26:00 AM

A continuation of the species, you write it so well, Sara...

Vandana Sharma

Date: 5/16/2013 7:44:00 AM

:) Flowing with the wind...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2013 7:00:00 AM

- You can actually make dandelions wine ... :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/16/2013 6:58:00 AM

I really do enjoy a field of dandelions, they are so beautiful, and they are a lot of fun to play with when they seed and you blow them into the wind, that's awesome! I'm glad you wrote a poem about the dandelion, I surely should write a poem about them too...I'll plan on writing one tonight, late (that's when my creative juices flow)! You have delighted me with this masterpiece that you have written here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this creative and fun piece this morning! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2013 6:48:00 AM

Beautiful flower ........ but unwanted in the garden. - Well done Sara poem! - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)