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Dancing To Music Only She Can Hear - For Contest

began, she journeys to the deepest place following the road laid in her path nothing now can halt her race for life welcoming the nourishment within making ground she digs in for the fight feeling safe within her calm cocoon growing more with each new passing day kicking out she stretches wide her bed capturing the stuff of life she breathes drinking deeply from elixirs cup responding to the sound of mother’s voice dancing to music only she can hear written and posted October 2nd 2015

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Date: 10/2/2015 2:59:00 PM
Intriguing format, Bill. I think that the divide there makes it such that you can read it was two poems or as one whole entity. Dancing to that inner music is sweet....Is this about the birth of a baby? That's the feel I get from the lines. Lovely.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 10/2/2015 4:07:00 PM
it is! thanks for taking the time to read me. Blessyer ;)
Date: 10/2/2015 11:32:00 AM
I don't comprehend this style of poem. That is a shame for me. Excellent! Good luck!
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 10/2/2015 11:34:00 AM
what is it you don't understand, Anna? Can I help?

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