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Dancing Clouds - Cloud Contest

Clouds beautifully, float by with grace Like a whisper floating in the breeze Twisting like lovers in an embrace They hide the sun as if to tease A ballet of meringue aiming to please. As if on time the heavier clouds appear Like  the baddie  in any musical show Pushing the dainty clouds creating a tear Who then cry gently on the watchers below As nature creates a beautiful rainbow .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 9:03:00 AM
another nice winning poem.. enjoyed...PD
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:43:00 AM
Unique creative winning work.Congrats..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/29/2013 3:17:00 PM
hmm unique is that another way of saying not nice, lol Sara I am joking you ...Seren
Date: 8/27/2013 6:48:00 PM
Seren Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/29/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Morgan for your comment/....Seren
Date: 8/27/2013 9:01:00 AM
"A ballet of meringue aiming to please" wow........I love that unique idea of the clouds! This was a beauty !! Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/29/2013 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Carrie...Seren
Date: 8/27/2013 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your place on the winners list Sass building quite a rep here love xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/27/2013 2:46:00 AM
Mandy have missed you, hugssss...Seren
Date: 8/26/2013 8:30:00 PM
congratulations Seren, ~Love ~~SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 9:40:00 PM
Thank you SKAT......Seren
Date: 8/26/2013 8:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest..thank you for supporting it. BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 PM
Thank you BG I am glad I got the form correct....Seren
Date: 8/17/2013 6:27:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Love the ballet images, and the way you wounded something beautiful and created more beauty.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 9:42:00 PM
Thanks you Monterey ....Seren
Date: 8/15/2013 5:38:00 AM
Gorgeous, simply a gorgeous write my friend! This is a beautiful and ingenious poem Seren! I really loved reading this elaborately wondrous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Russell ......Seren

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