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Dancing Clouds - Cloud contest

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Dancing Clouds - Cloud contest

Clouds beautifully, float by with grace
Like a whisper floating in the breeze
Twisting like lovers in an embrace
They hide the sun as if to tease
A ballet of meringue aiming to please.

As if on time the heavier clouds appear
Like  the baddie  in any musical show
Pushing the dainty clouds creating a tear
Who then cry gently on the watchers below
As nature creates a beautiful rainbow .

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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:03:00 AM
    another nice winning poem.. enjoyed...PD

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Unique creative winning work.Congrats..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmm unique is that another way of saying not nice, lol Sara I am joking you ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Seren Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Morgan for your comment/....Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:01:00 AM
    "A ballet of meringue aiming to please" wow........I love that unique idea of the clouds! This was a beauty !! Congratulations!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carrie...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your place on the winners list Sass building quite a rep here love xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/27/2013 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mandy have missed you, hugssss...Seren
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:30:00 PM
    congratulations Seren, ~Love ~~SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT......Seren
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in my contest..thank you for supporting it. BG

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you BG I am glad I got the form correct....Seren
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Simply beautiful. Love the ballet images, and the way you wounded something beautiful and created more beauty.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you Monterey ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:38:00 AM
    Gorgeous, simply a gorgeous write my friend! This is a beautiful and ingenious poem Seren! I really loved reading this elaborately wondrous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell ......Seren