Dance of the Universe

The misty white light Piercing my window Could have been a divine sign Or just an ordinary second Of happiness I've been told That I'll never be able To recognise it Dressed like that The calm sea Used to bathe the gulls In living foam The blue-eyed warm wind Carrying away Tears of lost lovers I'm still so small For a heaven so great Just a frail child Learning the first steps In the dance Of the universe

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/21/2013 2:00:00 PM

I love this, it's so charming, going into favorites ;} thank you for reading My Family Hair. have a blessed day Berinde .

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/20/2013 2:01:00 PM

My dear, a beautiful poem expressing the unseen, the universal psyche. No, we are not small when we are touched by that light, for we are part of it. If you have time look my poems: KNOW THY SELF, MY LIBERATOR and CREATION to see what I mean. Thank you!