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Damp Evening

After a misty rain, dampness consumes Many steps go upwards from the sidewalk They are quite wet from the water that blooms All from the sky the rain begins to talk The wetness is cool, a feeling that stuck After a misty rain, dampness consumes The air glows by some lamps in the mist struck The rain billows in the night fog that plumes People out all want to go in their rooms As the weather conditions are quite sad After a misty rain, dampness consumes The odd sight is eerie and shows off bad People cannot see far ahead of them The feel of this night brings a sense of doom Top of the stairs where it is surely dim After a misty rain, dampness consumes
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Hello Russell...this poem describes how it has been here all day...damp and foggy...wonderfully described with your beautiful words..somehow made more cheerful..:-)

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:53:00 AM
    This is an excellent quatern poem you've penned my very dear friend Russell. I'm so happy to stop by this evening & read it. I love the personifications here and you perfectly described the evening with your magical and very creative words. Thank you so much for sharing! Loving so much and enjoying again your outstanding piece this evening! TYSM for sharing & good luck always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:18:00 PM
    A wonderful, write, Russell! I love how this poem flows in the quatern form. Well done! Have to say thanks for your encouragement. As always, your kindness means a lot! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:54:00 AM
    My friend I just came back from an excursion on the top of the mountain near Athens about 4200 feet height where I lived your poem. It seems that you have described the beautiful experience I had! Needless to say it was marvelous as your poem had foretold!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:28:00 AM
    a great, melloe piece...the rhyme and flow exquisite; sort of rolls along, russell.. i like your kind od evening; you have written it very well... wow.. huggs

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 7:03:00 AM
    There is a somber mood to this one..Enjoyed reading your creation this morn..Sara