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Cuddling the Rain : -A New Poetic Form-

` ``` ` ` ``` ` ` `` ` `` ` ` ` CUDDLING THE RAIN
jadedl heart should be moistened, inner child longs for wonder. seize the rain cuddling it tight, swirl in the whirlpools of dance!
all rights reserved © * form of poetry: whitney definition: a titled syllabic form, created by Betty Ann Whitney, has exactly seven lines syllable pattern: 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 7 ````` ````` ````` ````` for Brian Strand's " As You Like It" by nette onclaud

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Date: 5/6/2011 2:47:00 PM
Let's do a Whitney contest sooooon. I really like this form-it is like an enchantment! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:37:00 PM
Wishing you all the love and friendship that is in the eyes of an infant. The laughter in the pure spring that sprang in the noonday and the special warm hug of affection in the aftermath of a long night. I appreciate your comments, cheers.
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:27:00 PM
This is an enchanting form, Nette. Thanks for sharing it here at POetrysoup.
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:04:00 PM
This sure is an interesting form, Nette! Never heard of the Whitney before (heehee do not laugh, ok you can-- I actually thought that this was inspired by Whitney Houston in the Body Guard! Especially when I read that part about the metal art-- wasn't there a part in the movie where she was wearing that metallic costume thingy?? Heehee! Now I know o_o-- thanks for sharing this form! Very interesting thoughts you have here, and really like your title for it :) hugs
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:33:00 AM
loved this write Nette, enjoyed it, very creative.
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:16:00 AM
Luving this entries my friend.. and if u can please check out my Intense Inferno for Dakarai..thankxx luv..
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:08:00 AM
A very strong and exciting Verse dear poet, I methodically enjoyed it Nette ! Have a fantastic rainy day ! Well, I am ;) much love, james
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:36:00 AM
Tremendous thoughts in this awesome write Nette dear friend... luv the syllable pattern for sure.. another new form to send to TPS for approval here.. luv this flow and the child reference.. and oh cuddling the rain is ultra cool..luv..original and creative as I am constantly amazed and your proficiency luv..
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
Wonderful write on a new form,Nette.Best wishes--soupmail---kashinath
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:55:00 AM
The poetry here at the Soup today is so diverse. It was a pleasure to read yours Nette. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to continue writing always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:28:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..........George
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