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'crystal White Falling'

We lay together warm as kittens as crystal snow fell outside, The light of my life stirred in his sleep, murmuring; It is all clear as crystal now, all the events came like a wave, He kissed me with lips as sweet as the whispering wind. Our love a jewel and a rose to treasure. "Don't go!" I whispered to him as I faded off to sleep, cozy in bed, Life is a journey with a destination unknown, time is a thief; Like a swarm of butterflies I was being chased into bitter reality, The telephone was ringing, ringing, ringing and ringing. I am lost in a swirling storm of grief, forever. The voice on the telephone left me heartbroken, shattered, On a road my love lay dead as the crystal white snow fell; I am on a roller-coaster of emotions that take me up and down, The crystal white falling always reminds me of him. Pages of time turn but I always turn them back. _______________________ March 16, 2014 Poetry/Verse/'Crystal White Falling' Copyright Protected, ID 03-550-638-16 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest Metaphor Crystal, Sponsor, nette onclaud, Judged 03/2014 First Place

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Date: 3/21/2014 5:52:00 PM
Reads like a winner for it is packed with emotion..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your great write and well-deserved win my dear friend BW! TYSM for sharing as well. May I also have this chance to say TYSM for appreciating my poem in your One line poem contest. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Leonora
Date: 3/19/2014 4:30:00 PM
Hi Broken, :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 3/18/2014 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, constance
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Ram.
Date: 3/18/2014 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations..... SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Skat
Date: 3/18/2014 4:50:00 PM
This tragic story is too real ... too heart-breaking. Though, Beautiful..... Well written, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Carrie
Date: 3/18/2014 2:03:00 PM
a pensive write that sparkles, my dear constance.. warm congrats on your great win in my challenge!.. huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:20:00 AM
Thank you nette.
Date: 3/18/2014 1:54:00 PM
a heartfelt piece...a great one!! ..Congratulations on your grand win!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Aiyah
Date: 3/18/2014 1:47:00 PM
congrats on such a fine win :) // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Paul
Date: 3/18/2014 1:03:00 PM
- B.W. - congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 3/18/2014 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Broken Wings! Verlena
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Verlena.
Date: 3/18/2014 11:19:00 AM
Masterful.... superb, loved it!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Keith
Date: 3/17/2014 11:36:00 AM
heartbreaking but beautiful, my friend. a sure winner. Hope you and the kitties are having a good day. Today is 16 years since we lost our Pads (I know you'll understand how it still feels) x
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Jack
Date: 3/16/2014 10:41:00 PM
I believe we have found a 1st place winner for Nette's contest! I haven't written mine yet, and I need to, just that it might be extremely difficult to come up with a poem that can beat out this gem! Your last line is tremendous, and so real! I feel that way at times, but I usually look ahead and not backwards! Did this occurrence actually happen in life that you express perfectly within your piece? I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Russell
Date: 3/16/2014 4:53:00 PM
wow, Constance. You are so good at taking a theme like Crystal and creating such a touching poem from it. This will be high on the winners' list, I am sure.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 3/16/2014 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful..and yet so sad. That last line leaves a haunting memory. // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Paul

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