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Cry-Of-The-Unborn

CRY OF THE UNBORN Before I was formed in my mother’s womb He held my hand and called my name And now I am to return to him as innocent Without sin I go to my heavenly father Before I saw the light in the world Before taking my first breath, nor having my first tooth I was extinguished Batted and murdered I was sentenced to death Like a soldier sent to war My mission was cut short For my talents and skills can never be of any use What will I report to ma creator For my cry shall pierce the heavens And my tears shall fill the earth My sorrow shall solidify their hearts And my voice will never be heard among the living By: B. N. Pule

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/23/2013 7:15:00 AM
Bokamosa, this is the deepest poem I've ever read. .., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:56:00 AM
Bokamoso, very deep, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Bokamoso Pule
Date: 5/31/2013 1:18:00 AM
WILL SURE DO....my new work is now available
Date: 5/23/2013 6:28:00 PM
You write so well my dear friend! This is sad but very beautiful write. Welcome to the soup and please keep on sharing your amazing talent. I like your poem. Thank you for sharing and for your precious time reading mine. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora
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Bokamoso Pule
Date: 5/25/2013 3:49:00 AM
THANK YOU
Date: 5/21/2013 7:58:00 AM
WOW.. what an emotive and powerful poem. I interpret this as either abortion or an act of other violence-- am I correct? If it is abortion.. I agree 100%
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Bokamoso Pule
Date: 5/22/2013 5:02:00 AM
abortion is it... 100%

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